jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

NikamiJano July 30, 2006, 2:59am 1

***maiN samandrooN ka mizaj hooN abhi is nadi ko pata nahi
sabhi nadya’N muj se mili magar maiN kisi se ja mila nahi

meray dil ki simet na dekh tu kisi aur ka ye muqaam hai
yahaN us ki yadaiN muqeem haiN ye kisi ko maiN ne dya nahi

mujhay dekh k na jhuka nazar na kawaar dil k tu band kar
teray ghar maiN aa’oN gha kis tarha k maiN admi hooN hawaa nahi

meray dil ko khushboo se bhar gaya wo kareeb se yuuN guzar gaya
wo meri nazar maiN tu phool hai usay kia laga maiN pata nahi

ya muqadrooN ki likhawatiaN jo chamak gayeN wo parhi gayeN
jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

ya badar ab be sawal hai k ye berukhi hai ya payar hai
kabhi paas us k gaya nahi kabhi door us se raha nahi***

goodnews July 30, 2006, 3:08am 2

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

Khub

reet July 30, 2006, 4:16am 3

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

nice sharing.......thnx

Bholay_Bisray July 30, 2006, 9:31am 4

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

ya muqadrooN ki likhawatiaN jo chamak gayeN wo parhi gayeN
jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi
**
Very touching & Beautiful!** :)

mahamkhan July 30, 2006, 9:33am 5

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

nice....

HeArT_HaCKeR July 30, 2006, 11:39am 6

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

Boht khoob nikammi jee

kabir1 July 30, 2006, 11:58am 7

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

bahut behatreen

maza aagaya
agar shayar kanaam pata ho tau pls bata ne meharbaani kijiye

NikamiJano July 30, 2006, 12:03pm 8

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

shukria kabir lakin jahan se parhi thei
wahan se sha'er ka name laina bhool gaye :( ab yaad nahi kahan se parhi thei

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 30, 2006, 1:29pm 9

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

Buhat khoob Nikami ji, thanks for sharing this beautiful piece:-)

NikamiJano August 1, 2006, 2:19am 10

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

thanks news

"flirting in good humor"

"flirting in good humor"

NikamiJano August 1, 2006, 2:21am 11

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

thanks reet :)

NikamiJano August 1, 2006, 2:21am 12

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

thanks Bb:)

NikamiJano August 2, 2006, 3:14am 13

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

thanks Hh

Amal August 2, 2006, 10:02am 14

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

Wah ji wah…kya baat hey NikamiJi :k: zabardast ghazal hey, har sheir kamaal ka hey. I don’t know, but looks like Bashir Badr’s creation. Unka style hey ye. Anyway, hum tak to aap ney hi pohaNchai hey na ye, thanx for sharing

NikamiJano August 3, 2006, 12:04am 15

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

thanks Aymal chaliey ap ko moqa tu mila fursat tu mili yahan taak anay ki…wesay aj kal lagta hia k nikami taak poohnchnay ka visa lagna shoro ho gaya jo ap :p..g ye badar sahib ki hi hai u know am fan sum bary baray ap jesay poets ki blush:

Amal August 3, 2006, 12:07am 16

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

ha-ha-ha…Mogembo, khush huwa

NikamiJano August 3, 2006, 12:22am 17

Re: jo meRay qalam se likha gaya usay keoN kisi ne parha nahi

ap Ramboo kab se banay :D..ap tu masoopm se shaa'er they jahan taak Nikami ko yaad parta :)