jo mera chara'gaR tha meiN usi ka hooN nishana

Koyal · January 30, 2004, 11:58am

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aa’ey saarb hasratoN ke zara baat suntey jaana
jo choor choor ho pehley usey aur kya sataana!

ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hai bazi
jo mera chara’gaR tha meiN usi ka hooN nishana

wo lamha jab se meiN ne teri ulfat ka jaam khoya
chatkha huwa hey tab se sochoN ka har pe’maana

abhi tamheed hi suni thi ke bilak ke ro parra wo
jo meiN kehney ja raha tha wo tha asal fasaana

hoNtoN pe kuch nahi hai aaNsu-bhari heiN aaNkheiN
yuN lagta hai aaj us ne seekha hey naya bahaana

jo agan tu ne di thi meiN usi meiN jal raha hooN
mujhey door hi sey takna merey paas ab na aana

ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN
jo chiraagh bujh chukey heiN ab kya unhaiN jalaana

ye dhanak mohabbatoN ki merey paas ab na laao
jo rang bikhaR ga’ey heiN unhey phir se kya sajaana

ye be’rukhi ke nashtaR to meiN kab se seh raha hooN
is baar tum milo to koi zakham naya lagaana!

Mrs_Mazhar · January 30, 2004, 12:29pm

Bohat Khoob :)

Swera · January 30, 2004, 12:48pm

ye be’rukhi ke nashtaR to meiN kab se seh raha hooN
is baar tum milo to koi zakham naya lagaana!

:k:

nice, very nice:)

Azad · January 30, 2004, 1:18pm

is baar tum milo to koi zakham naya lagaana!

kia baat hay :k:

WiseGuy · January 30, 2004, 1:33pm

Nice :k:

Capricorn · January 30, 2004, 1:40pm

jo agan tu ne di thi meiN usi meiN jal raha hooN
mujhey door hi sey takna merey paas ab na aana

Door se takking

Its a lovely ghazal Koyal

Shab-e-Hijar · January 30, 2004, 4:03pm

very nice :k:

system · January 30, 2004, 5:59pm

very nice

Amarbail · January 30, 2004, 8:47pm

No doubt, its really an awesome piece of poetry and thanks for sharing …:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 30, 2004, 10:34pm

nice1:k:

cuteepie · January 31, 2004, 12:44am

buhet khoob :k:

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 11:12am

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*Originally posted by Mrs_Mazhar: *
Bohat Khoob :)
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thanks mrs..:)

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 11:13am

thanks swera…

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 11:14am

PS: pata nahi kahan kahan se log a jatey haiN..

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 11:16am

hmmmm why door se taking capri zara aik dafa pass a k tako aur dekho hota kia hia..abhi tu sirf aik ankh;) phir …

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 11:17am

Azad · January 31, 2004, 12:52pm

Kuch jalnay ki bou aa rahi hay

Koyal · January 31, 2004, 2:40pm

PS:kuch log ahhh:snooty:

Swera · January 31, 2004, 2:42pm

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

thanks swera...:)
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you most welcome:)

Koyal · February 1, 2004, 12:15pm

eid walay din ph keon band hai