jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal August 25, 2005, 10:15pm 1

kaha is ne k tum taa’beer ho aur khawab sa hooN maiN
ho tum be-khavwab mudat se azal se jaaghta hoN maiN

jo poocha dil ka saoda kab kia kesay kia tum ne
wo bola aik paal thehroo yehi tu soochta hooN maiN

jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi
tu har zara pukaar utha k us ko jaanta hooN maiN

bhala is daar pe ja k kis lee’ay khali palat aa’ey
kaha manzil ko choo kar b laga ik raasta hooN maiN

abhi soocha he tha dhoondhooN ufaq k paar ka rasta
tu dil bola mera soocho kabhi ka laa’pata hooN maiN

hawa boli samandar se teraa bhe koi bichraa hai
kaha ja ja k sahil pe usi ko dhoondhta hooN maiN

HeArT_HaCKeR August 25, 2005, 10:23pm 2

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Boht khoob.. :k:

Tu ...

SunnyBoy August 25, 2005, 10:45pm 3

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nice :k:

Jhuki_Nigahein August 26, 2005, 7:49pm 4

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buhat khoob

umer.ashraf August 26, 2005, 8:29pm 5

Re: jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi

Very nice.

Kaun kehta hay keh muhabbat ki zabaaN hoti hay
Yeh haqeeqat to nigahooN say bayaaN hoti hay

whizz August 26, 2005, 8:55pm 6

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bohut khoob

Aryaan August 27, 2005, 1:34pm 7

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Bohat achey Koyal…:k:

nakhan August 27, 2005, 4:17pm 8

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hawa boli samandar se teraa bhe koi bichraa hai
kaha ja ja k sahil pe usi ko dhoondhta hooN maiN

Zabardast....

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 28, 2005, 5:16am 9

Re: jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi

Beautiful.... Tnx for Sharing MamooN :D

fais August 28, 2005, 5:29am 10

Re: jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi

Again a very Good piece of Poetry ~

jo maiN ne dasht per ja k pukara hai khudaa koi
tu har zara pukaar utha k us ko jaanta hooN maiN

Keep it UP jee and thanks for sharing

Assi agian fan ban gaey~

Shab-e-Hijar August 28, 2005, 6:03am 11

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bohat khoob!

cuteepie August 28, 2005, 11:21am 12

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very nice :k:

WiseGuy August 31, 2005, 1:45pm 13

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wah bohat khoob :)

Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:14am 14

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thanks heartu

Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:16am 15

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Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:17am 16

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thanks ankhin

Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:20am 17

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Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:21am 18

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thanks wiz

Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:23am 19

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thanks Ari

Koyal September 9, 2005, 1:24am 20

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thanks Golden baji