system
January 21, 2004, 7:26pm
1
Jo loog chaley jaatey haiN wapas nahiN aatey
Hum bhoolna chaaheiN tou bhula nahiN paatey
KiyoN hijar ki doolat humeiN bin maangey mili hai
Milta jo tera pyaar tou aansoo nahiN bahatey
Yaad aatey haiN barsaat k bheegay hovey mausam
Pehlay ki tarha kiyoN nahiN saawan maiN nahatey
Yeh chaand sitaarey mujhey kertay haiN nasehat
RaatooN ko phira kertay ho, soo kiyoN nahi jaatey
786zia
January 22, 2004, 7:34pm
7
tumharee khatir yeh likh raha hooun
kahain ho tum koi khaber nahie mujko
wagerna dooor ker tumhain pa leta
kiya main ne koi kasoor intna bara hai kiya
jiss ki khatir mujhe yeh dooree ki saza hai mili
tere faraq main youn doooba hooun keh
teerena bhool gaya kinare ki berukhi dekh ker
tum na yaad muj ko karo yeh bhi aaik zulm hai janna
hum tu tehre hain wahain jahain koi rasta hai nahie
intezar abb tak tri mail ka hai muj ko
kiya ghazab teri delay nai meri kahani per
abb bhi hans ker lagta hai tum mujhe taal doo gi
phir bhi majboor houn teri janib hi challa aaoun ga
vese tum bhout sad ho rahi ho dil na dokhaya karo ji
sanmbhal ker challo...
agar koi gustakhi ho gaie ho tu dar guzar se kam le le na
AIK sharti
ZIA
786zia
January 22, 2004, 7:40pm
8
tumharee khatir yeh likh raha hooun
kahain ho tum koi khaber nahie mujko
wagerna dooor ker tumhain pa leta
kiya main ne koi kasoor intna bara hai kiya
jiss ki khatir mujhe yeh dooree ki saza hai mili
tere faraq main youn doooba hooun keh
teerena bhool gaya kinare ki berukhi dekh ker
tum na yaad muj ko karo yeh bhi aaik zulm hai janna
hum tu tehre hain wahain jahain koi rasta hai nahie
intezar abb tak tri mail ka hai muj ko
kiya ghazab teri delay nai meri kahani per
abb bhi hans ker lagta hai tum mujhe taal doo gi
phir bhi majboor houn teri janib hi challa aaoun ga
vese tum bhout sad ho rahi ho dil na dokhaya karo ji
sanmbhal ker challo...
agar koi gustakhi ho gaie ho tu dar guzar se kam le le na
AIK sharti
ZIA
chodhry
January 23, 2004, 4:00pm
10
wah wah vivo kia baat hey :k:
PS: plz empty ur inbox
HAMMAD
January 23, 2004, 6:53pm
12
hey yaad dila dee zalim tum nay kiss kee
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddeennn
system
January 23, 2004, 7:21pm
13
thanx..
aur inbox meiN khali nahi ker sakti..
_MuNiYa
January 23, 2004, 8:07pm
15
Lovely poem and love your signature
786zia
January 24, 2004, 12:29am
17
i hope key mera hall tek hi hai
hello ji bass response leni thi
mill gaeee
shukria
vese thori bhout ulti sidhi batain bhi ker leni chahiyain
yeh tumhare liya tu direct nahie lekhe tha lekin bass lekhe gayeee
agar kuch pasand aaee houn tu in ko intekhab ki string main dall dooun?
sirf tumhare ishareee se
btw u r improving on ur poetry
but i think i am thinking of opening a poultery farm u know y?
let me tell u cause is easier to communicate with chickens then humans..
me request people pls make sure do laugh but in ur mind think about it..
abb main chala
h r u?
havent heard of u for quite a time?
if i have said any thing which may have heart ur feeling i humbelly appologise from within the depth of my chotha sa heart ...
dooston ko choti choti batoun ka bura nahie manana chahiyiae...
phir milain ge ....
allah hafiz
jhoota sa shatrti
sirf zia
Re: – Jo loog chaley jaatey haiN…
Very beautiful dear
Na shikaayatein, na gilaa karey
Koi aisa shakhs hua karey
Jo merey liye hee saja karey
Mujh hee sey Baatein kiya karey
Kabhi royey jaaey woh bepanaah
Kabhi be-tahaasha udaas ho
Kabhi chupkey chupkey dabey qadam
Merey peechay Aa kar, hansa karey
Meri qurbatein, meri chaahatein
Koi yaad kare qadam qadam
Mein taveel safar mein hoon agar
Meri waapsi ki Dua karey…
Ajnabi4ever