jo is qadar ho chara gar

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 1:54pm

Yeh zara zara si baat per,
Tarha tarha ka azaab kiyon?

Jo kisi say bhi khafa na ho,
Mujhey us Wafa ki talash hai.

Mujhey laghzishon pay her ghari,
Koi tokta hay baar baar.

Jisay ker k dil ko dukh na ho,
Mujhey us gunah ki talash hai,

Bina Humsafar k kab talak,
Koi musafaton main laga rahay.

Jahan koi kisi say juda na ho,
Mujhey us raah ki talash hay.

Mujhey daikh ker jo aik nazar,
Meray saray dard samajh sakay.

Jo is qadar ho Chara-e-gar,
Mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hay…!!!

KKF · May 22, 2012, 1:59pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

are, aapne to Ghazal ke TukRe kar diye...ise aise likhiye:

Yeh zara zara si baat per, Tarha tarha ka azaab kiyon?
Jo kisi say bhi khafa na ho, Mujhey us Wafa ki talash hai.

Mujhey laghzishon pay her ghari, Koi tokta hay baar baar.
Jisay ker k dil ko dukh na ho, Mujhey us gunah ki talash hai,

Bina Humsafar k kab talak, Koi musafaton main laga rahay.
Jahan koi kisi say juda na ho, Mujhey us raah ki talash hay.

Mujhey daikh ker jo aik nazar, Meray saray dard samajh sakay.
Jo is qadar ho Chara-e-gar, Mujhey us nigaah ki talaash hay.....!!!

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:01pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

main nyjaisy parhi bilkul waisy hi post ki

KKF · May 22, 2012, 2:03pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

achchha to, kisii aur ne iske TukRe kiye...use Haazir kiyaa jaaye! :D

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:04pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

wo pta nmhi kahan hai

KKF · May 22, 2012, 2:08pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

shahr meN laDDoo baTvaayeN, jahaaN hogaa laDDoo Haasil karne ke liye khiNchaa chalaa aayegaa

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:09pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

thek hai jaisa ap kaho

muqawwee123 · May 22, 2012, 2:10pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

Who is the poet?

KKF · May 22, 2012, 2:11pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

use laDDoo baTvaa kar phaNsaane kii poorii koshish kii jaa rahii hai...:p

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:13pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

pata nahi... i just read this on facebook

muqawwee123 · May 22, 2012, 2:14pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

Its by Amal.

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:15pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

is it… wow… :k:

KKF · May 22, 2012, 2:17pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

oh, really? wow! maashaa Allah, he is doing great by being on the FB :) good job! :)

punjabi_kuri_1 · May 22, 2012, 2:22pm

Re: jo is qadar ho chara gar

but i read this on a page on FB...