JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO~~INDEPENDENCE DAY

JIS DES KE KOOCHAY KOOCHAY MEIN
IFLAAS AWARA PHIRTA HO

JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO
DUKH DARD FALAK SE GIRTA HO

JAHAN BHOOKAY NANGAY BACHAY BHI
AAHON PE PALAY JATAY HON

JAHAN SACHAI KE MUJRIM BHI
ZINDAAN MEIN DALAY JATAY HON

JAHAN MAJBOORON KE KHOON SE APNAY
QASOOR BHI DHOYE JATAY HON

USS DES KI MATTI BARSON SE
ISS DES KE BE HISS LOGON KO

“AZADI” MUBARIK KEHTI HAI
“AZADI” MUBARIK KEHTI HAI

Re: JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO~~INDEPENDENCE DAY

quite true
Nice poetry
But
Shama Jalaiay Rakhna hay
Ghar to Aakhir apna hay

Re: JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO~~INDEPENDENCE DAY

saqi jani dear be positive yar jaisa bhi he watan to apna he, hum pardes men rehne walon se pocho apna watan kia hota he.

Re: JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO~~INDEPENDENCE DAY

True................but why blame the mother land for the crimes and sins of its citizens and leaders.

Re: JO DHARTI BHOOK UGALTI HO~~INDEPENDENCE DAY

we can never blame our mother land for our frustration......ye mera aur is dharti pe basnay walay ek ek shakhs ka qasoor hai...ham mein se he tu hain wo laug jo yateemon ka maal khatay hain aur qabar khaud ke murdon ke kafan chori kartay hain...ham sab apnay aap ko kesay bari u zimma kar saktay hain...hamari dharti tab tk bhook uglay gi jab tak is ke haq adaa nahi kiye jatay...shayid jagnay ka waqt aan poncha hai magar hamein shaoor nahi.

Good pasha g