jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

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na ganwaoo navak-e-neem kash, dil-e-raiza raiza ganwa diya
jo bachayy hien sangg samaitt lu, tann daagh daagh saja diya

mere chara-gaRr ko naveed ho, saf-e-dushmanaaN ko khabR kero
wo jo Qarz rakhtayy thayy jaan per, wo hisaab aaj chuka diya

keroo kanjj-jabeeN pe sarr kafann, mere Qatilo`N ko gumaaN na ho
k gharoor-e-ishQ ka baankpan, pas-e-margg hum ne bhula diya

idheR ik harf k kushtanii, yahan laakh uzaR tha guftanii
jo kaha tu sunn k urra diya, jo likha tu parhh k mita diya

!.. jo rukayy tu koh-e-garaaN thayy hum, jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzaR gaye
rah-e-yaaR hum ne Qadm Qadm, tujhe yaad-gaaR bana diya … !

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[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Amazing by him :-)

[Aryaan]

Very Nice HeArT HaCKeR..:k:

[SunnyBoy]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

nice :k:

[aabla_pa]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

its such a beauty.

jo rukayy tu koh-e-garaaN thayy hum, jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzaR gaye

:k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

thanks to all :)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

a master piece of faiz … beautiful :k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

thanks shabb :)

[mirage]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

Rah e Yaar, ham ne qadam qadam, tujhey yaadgar bana diya!

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what a pick :k:

[system]

@HeArT_HaCKeR

***!.. jo rukayy tu koh-e-garaaN thayy hum, jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzaR gaye******rah-e-yaaR hum ne Qadm Qadm, tujhe yaad-gaaR bana diya ... !***

Reminds me of something that adds to the beauty of this masterpiece.. :-)

[Koyal]

Re: jo chalayy tu jaaN se guzzaR gaye .. .

beautiful heartu :)

[uzee007]

Beautiful.... as always by Faiz Sahib. With due respect I just wanted to make a small correction which may have been just a typo ... second misra in the first shair:

jo bachayy hien sangg samaitt lu, tann daagh daagh saja diya

should be

jo bachayy hien sangg samaitt lu, tann-e daagh daagh luta diya