Ali_2
November 19, 2007, 4:35pm
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jo ik nazar ki junbish se, sub dil ki basti loot gaya
wo jis se ankhain chaar huin, aur haath se saghar choot gaya
dil us ka bhi hai aur mera bhi, faraq shakeel itna laikin
wo pather tha jo saabut hai, ye sheesha tha jo toot gaya
Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
Beautiful shair ali :)
Ali_2
November 19, 2007, 4:39pm
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
thanks :)
muncho
November 19, 2007, 6:48pm
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
wowww!!!! kia kahnay g;
Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
nicee ali
Ali_2
November 20, 2007, 4:55am
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
thanks :)
Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
Buhattt khoob..
Ali_2
November 20, 2007, 11:39am
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
thanks
Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
Wah Jee.............
Bohat hee Umdaa!!!!!!
Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
Nice :)
Koyal
November 20, 2007, 2:05pm
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
jo ik nazar ki junbish se, sub dil ki basti loot gaya
wo jis se ankhain chaar huin, aur haath se saghar choot gaya
dil us ka bhi hai aur mera bhi, faraq shakeel itna laikin
wo pather tha jo saabut hai, ye sheesha tha jo toot gaya
nice sher Ali
Ali_2
November 21, 2007, 3:31am
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Re: Jo aik nazar ki junbish se
thanks :)