Jo Adhoori Rah gayee thee Kahani Sochna

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Dania July 27, 2007, 6:18pm 1

***Jo Adhoori Reh Gayi Thi Kahani Sochna
Beth Ker Tanha Faqat Baaten Purani Sochna

Jab Kisi Saahil Pe Aajaiy Meri Yaad Tumhen
Kion Jazeeron Ki Taraf Rehta Hai Paani Sochna

Tum Agar Bicharney Per Khush Ho To Yun He Sahi
Beth Ker Tanha Faqat Shaamen Purani Sochna

Jab Kabhi Likhna Kahani Zeest Ke Mozu Pe Tum
Kioun Badal Jaatey Hen Lafzon Ke Maa’yne Sochna***

mhd.86 July 27, 2007, 7:04pm 2

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Tum Agar Bicharney Per Khush Ho To Yun He Sahi
Beth Ker Tanha Faqat Shaamen Purani Sochna

bohat achi hai

babri July 27, 2007, 7:04pm 3

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****Its superb. very nice. thanks for sharing it with us.

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Amal July 27, 2007, 7:16pm 4

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Beautiful ghazal Dania_2000 :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

SJ July 27, 2007, 7:22pm 5

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Nice Ghazal
Love this shair :k:

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Prince_Ali July 27, 2007, 8:01pm 6

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buhut khub dania :k:

redidentity July 28, 2007, 4:39am 7

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Beautiful..

m.a.d.i.h.a July 28, 2007, 1:05pm 8

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very nice

Sheal July 28, 2007, 1:08pm 9

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bohot achay.... :)

Dania July 28, 2007, 6:09pm 10

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shukriya :)

redrozez July 28, 2007, 9:41pm 11

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beautiful:)