Jo aata hai zakhm lagaanay aata hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Khudgharzi ke khaar chubhaanay aata hai |
Jo aata hai zakhm lagaanay aata hai ||

Ab uss ki ummeed na kar wo jhoota tha |
Kiski duniya kaun basaanay aata hai ??

Ek pal khud se doo’r nahi honay deti |
Tanhaai ko saath nibhaanay aata hai ||

Dahshatgardi khaak mitaaega jug se |
uss ko to bus aag lagaanay aata hai ||

Yu’N to sab JAWED bazaahir haiN apne |
DekheN kaaNdha kaun lagaanay aata hai ?? **

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:k:

**Ab uss ki ummeed na kar wo jhoota tha |
Kiski duniya kaun basaanay aata hai ??

**waise umeed pe dunya qaim hai

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بہت خوب حاتم جاوید بھائی

بہت اچھی غزل پر داد قبول کیجیے۔

درست لفظ “چبھونا” ہوتا ہے اس قافیہ “چبھانے” غلط ہے۔

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bahot Khoob Jawed Bhai…FaseeH Bhai ne jo farmaayaa uske 'ilaava maiN 'arz karnaa chaahuuNgaa k saHeeH talaffuz Gharaz hai na k Gharz aur lafz EK [alif, ye, kaaf] ko IK [alif, kaaf] honaa chaahiye…nazar-e-saanii kar leN plz. shukria.

donoN alfaaz kii tasHeeH ke ba’d vazan meN farq aa jaayegaa is liye is par Ghaur farmaaiyegaa. shukria