----Jitne Sapne The Sab ...----

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Jitne sapne the sab dar-badar bikhar gaye
Jitne sapne the sab dar-badar bikhar gaye
Hamare apne hame apnaane se mukar gaye

Humne tau nibhayee jab tak hum mein dam tha
Kuch aise bhie log the, zubaan de kar phir gaye

Zamaane ki nigahon se girna tha so gire
Afsos yeh hai apni aankho se lahoo bann gir gaye

Dil toota to armaano ke moti saanso mein piro liye
Aaj sambhalna mumkin nahi, moti is kadar bikhar gaye

Chaandini raato mein saath denewale hazaro mil gaye
Andhere chaaye to sab meherbaan jaane kidhar gaye

Dil dhadakta jaa raha hai, saanse chalti jaa rahi hai
Phir bhie ehsaas hai ke khud apni rooh se bichad gaye

wah … wah…

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wah wah..
good choice mohtarma :k:

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thanku thanku

thanku thanku ... adab adab.. shukryaaa :D

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wah ji wah bhut hi achay:k:

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thnx ap logon ka pyar aik din mujhe bulandion tak le jaega ;)hehehe

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yaar janu aap tou merey dili jazbaat ki akkaasi karti hain, jo mein alfaaz mein nahi kah sakta, woh aap apni shaaery mein kah deti hain :( ....very good poem, just like all of your others.

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:k: nice one

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ahan

chelo phir asa kerte hein tum mujhe dil ki baat buta dia kerna ;) aur phir me tumhare dil ki awaz ko shaeron me change kerke yaha post kerke kisi ko dedicate kerdoongi :D theek he

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theek hai janu jee

big grin

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ji

ok ji :)