jissay guftagoo main kamaal tha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Aceones February 21, 2005, 6:27pm 1

usai apnai ferda ki fikker thee jo mera waqfi-e-hal tha
woh jo us ki subh-e-urooj thee wohee mera waqt-e-zawal tha

meri bat kaisay woh janta mere bat kaisay woh manta
woh to khud fana kay saffer main tha usai rokna hee mahaal tha

jo us kai pass aagya wohee roshnee main naha gayaa
ajab us ka haibt-e-hussan tha ajab us ka rang-e-jamaal tha

mujhay chor ker kahan jaoo gay, main pooch pooch ker thak gayaa
woh mujh ko jawab tak na day saka, woh to khud sirapa sawaal tha

barsoon bad milla bhi to meray lub per koi gilla na tha
meri chup nay usay rula diya jissay guftagoo main kamaal tha

meray galay say lag ker ro diya bus faqat itna woh keh saka
jisay janta tha main zindgee woh sirf wehm-o-khayaal tha

parveen shakir

abc1234 February 21, 2005, 6:33pm 2

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bohot khoob

dil_dhoondta February 21, 2005, 6:48pm 3

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very nice

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HeArT_HaCKeR February 21, 2005, 6:51pm 4

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beautiful :k:

ajj subh mae yehi ghazal post kerne ka soch rahi thee....

luv this ghazal.. thanks for sharin

PS: aap zinda ho? :halo:

HeArT_HaCKeR February 21, 2005, 6:52pm 5

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aray haan.. one thing more

first shair ki 2nd line ye hai wo jo us ki subh urooj thee wohii mera waQt-e-zawaal tha

Koyal February 21, 2005, 8:07pm 6

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v nice one thanks for sharin:)

Aceones February 21, 2005, 8:47pm 7

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mod bibi: thnx
dil dhoondta:
HeArT HaCKeR:
Koyal:

Aceones February 21, 2005, 8:49pm 8

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mod bb: thnx
dil dhoondta: shukriya
HeArT HaCKeR: to kardeni thi na post, and yeah abhee hum zinda hain
Koyal: thnx for liking

Aceones February 21, 2005, 8:50pm 9

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thnx for correction :k:

homer_j_simpson February 22, 2005, 12:39am 10

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nice...

Floridians need love too

HeArT_HaCKeR February 22, 2005, 7:43pm 11

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kerne lagii thee mgr aap already ker chuke thay :halo:

mubarak ho! :halo: kahan ghayab hien waise aap?

Aceones February 22, 2005, 7:56pm 12

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sulemani chadar oRhi hoi thee is liye nazar nahi araha tha

ps: i was in khi

HeArT_HaCKeR February 22, 2005, 8:41pm 13

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lol…

hain suchii?? mae bhee pak gayee hoee thee na.. lekin khi nahi gayee.. shukr hai.. :halo:

Amal February 22, 2005, 9:53pm 14

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amazing :k:

Aceones February 23, 2005, 12:33pm 15

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thnx for liking the post

Rameesha February 24, 2005, 3:11pm 16

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beautiful choice **Aceones… **thanks for sharing

system February 24, 2005, 6:43pm 17

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Parveen Shaakir's poetry is somehow intoxicating... Thanks for sharing this masterpiece of her :-)

Aceones February 24, 2005, 9:27pm 18

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thnx rameesha and khamoshnigahain

ghazal_kisi_ke February 25, 2005, 3:14am 19

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no doubt its beautiful .. :k: ..