Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

aabla_pa March 19, 2007, 6:31pm 1

aik ehsaas-e-dil-kusha se hi
khil utha dil teri sada se hi

rasm ye HAQ pay jaan dene ki
hum ne seekhi hai KARBALA se hi

khud jiyo doosron ko jeenay do
apni adat hai ye sada se hi

senkrdon baar mil chukay hotay
aap miltay agar dua se hi

dard ki aabru nahi rehti
niyyat-e-hurf-e-iltjaa se hi (samjhay .. ? )

wo doraaha bhi aa gia AMJAD
jis ka dharka tha ibtida se hi

mr.muncho March 19, 2007, 8:59pm 2

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

haah haaa;
very nice abla g:(

ashi2007 March 19, 2007, 11:32pm 3

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

na jaane app ko kis baat ka gum hai jo asi rone dohne wali shayri likhte hain

being_lonely March 19, 2007, 11:35pm 4

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

Abla paa kion ppl ko rulata hai chor asad daagh ki shooki apna meer k gham mein kya rakha hai

ashi2007 March 19, 2007, 11:48pm 5

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

ro tu koi nahi raha

hiba_no.1 March 20, 2007, 7:24am 6

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

bohut khoob

aabla_pa March 20, 2007, 5:18pm 7

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

[QUOTE]
na jaane app ko kis baat ka gum hai jo asi rone dohne wali shayri likhte hain
[/QUOTE]

Ye poem ronay dhonay wali to nahi. Agar hai bhi to itni to nahi.
Besides, wo kya hai na:

khushi nay mujhko thukraaya hai ranj-o-gham nay paala hai
gulo'n nay berukhi ki hai to kaanto'n nay sanbhaala hai

Aesay halaat mein aesi hi poetry hogi

SJ March 20, 2007, 5:20pm 8

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

senkrdon baar mil chukay hotay
aap miltay agar dua se hi .........
wel said janab!!!!!!

aabla_pa March 20, 2007, 5:54pm 9

Re: Jiska Dharka Tha Ibtida Se Hee

Thnx Es Jay :)