Jisey nazar churaani hoti hey wo aankh milaata hi kiuN hey!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal July 7, 2007, 1:11am 1

Jisey nazar churaani hoti hey wo aankh milaata hi kiuN hey!
jisey laot ke jaana hota hey kuch door wo aata hi kiuN hey!

rasmoN ke zalim panjoN sey jisey dar ho toot, bikharney ka
mohabbat ke kheil khilonoN sey wo dil behlaata hi kiuN hey!

murjhaaey huwey sab phooloN sey wehshat si hoti hey jis ko
khizan ke ujrey mosam meiN wo baagh meiN jaata hi kiuN hey!

jisey khatra ho haathoN ki chatri aandhi ko rok na paey gi
wo waqt ki teiz hawaaoN meiN phir deep jalaata hi kiuN hey!

neend sey utthney par aksar jab toot hi jaana hey is ney
har koi phir apni aankhoN meiN ye khaab sajaata hi kiuN hey!

do’raahoN par aa kar aksar simtoN ke masaail hotey heiN
manzil ka pata janey bin bhi koi qadam barrhata hi kiuN hey!

ashqoN sey bheega do’shaala gar pyaar meiN dena hey ik din
to chorr ke jaaney waala phir rootthey ko manaata hi kiuN hey!

yuNhi panchi ishq, mohabbat ke naadaani kartey rehtey heiN
jisey dar toofaan sey lagta hey wo par pheilaata hi kiuN hey!

By: Amal

redidentity July 7, 2007, 4:37am 2

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Nice..

AQ July 7, 2007, 4:47am 3

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Beautiful

fazeelat July 7, 2007, 11:05am 4

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as usual..........superb

SJ July 7, 2007, 12:51pm 5

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bohat he khoob!!!!!!!!
:)

abeeha July 7, 2007, 5:23pm 6

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bohat achi hai,so nice:):)

deadsoul July 7, 2007, 8:53pm 7

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buhat zabardast amal
ap ki shayri hamesha mujhay idea deti hai aur alfaaz bhi
thx

bheegiyaad July 8, 2007, 3:26pm 8

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nice:)

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chacha_Ghalib July 9, 2007, 4:53am 9

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murjhaaey huwey sab phooloN sey wehshat si hoti hey jis ko
khizan ke ujrey mosam meiN wo baagh meiN jaata hi kiuN hey!

wah... bohat achay... definately bait-ul-ghazal

goodnews July 9, 2007, 7:53am 10

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 9, 2007, 9:19pm 11

Re: Jisey nazar churaani hoti hey wo aankh milaata hi kiuN hey!

Amal:

Jisey nazar churaani hoti hey wo aankh milaata hi kiuN hey! jisey laot ke jaana hota hey kuch door wo aata hi kiuN hey!

rasmoN ke zalim panjoN sey jisey dar ho toot, bikharney ka mohabbat ke kheil khilonoN sey wo dil behlaata hi kiuN hey!

murjhaaey huwey sab phooloN sey wehshat si hoti hey jis ko khizan ke ujrey mosam meiN wo baagh meiN jaata hi kiuN hey!

jisey khatra ho haathoN ki chatri aandhi ko rok na paey gi wo waqt ki teiz hawaaoN meiN phir deep jalaata hi kiuN hey!

neend sey utthney par aksar jab toot hi jaana hey is ney har koi phir apni aankhoN meiN ye khaab sajaata hi kiuN hey!

do'raahoN par aa kar aksar simtoN ke masaail hotey heiN manzil ka pata janey bin bhi koi qadam barrhata hi kiuN hey!

ashqoN sey bheega do'shaala gar pyaar meiN dena hey ik din to chorr ke jaaney waala phir rootthey ko manaata hi kiuN hey!

yuNhi panchi ishq, mohabbat ke naadaani kartey rehtey heiN jisey dar toofaan sey lagta hey wo par pheilaata hi kiuN hey!

By: Amal

in sabbaatoNka jawaab mil jaaey tou mujhey bhi zaroor bataaeiN:~) beautiful poem Amal, thanks for sharing:-)

Shab-e-Hijar July 10, 2007, 5:17pm 12

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wahh amal bohat khoob :)

aur ye sub kartay thory hain ho jata hai khudi :-/

Koyal July 11, 2007, 2:57am 13

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tajurba bolta hia :p ;)
keon masom ko kharab karti haiN shab :p

Koyal July 11, 2007, 2:58am 14

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YO!... I am in Love Wid.....

Jisey nazar churaani hoti hey wo aankh milaata hi kiuN hey!
jisey laot ke jaana hota hey kuch door wo aata hi kiuN hey!

rasmoN ke zalim panjoN sey jisey dar ho toot, bikharney ka
mohabbat ke kheil khilonoN sey wo dil behlaata hi kiuN hey!

murjhaaey huwey sab phooloN sey wehshat si hoti hey jis ko
khizan ke ujrey mosam meiN wo baagh meiN jaata hi kiuN hey!

jisey khatra ho haathoN ki chatri aandhi ko rok na paey gi
wo waqt ki teiz hawaaoN meiN phir deep jalaata hi kiuN hey!

neend sey utthney par aksar jab toot hi jaana hey is ney
har koi phir apni aankhoN meiN ye khaab sajaata hi kiuN hey!

do’raahoN par aa kar aksar simtoN ke masaail hotey heiN
manzil ka pata janey bin bhi koi qadam barrhata hi kiuN hey!

ashqoN sey bheega do’shaala gar pyaar meiN dena hey ik din
to chorr ke jaaney waala phir rootthey ko manaata hi kiuN hey!

yuNhi panchi ishq, mohabbat ke naadaani kartey rehtey heiN
jisey dar toofaan sey lagta hey wo par pheilaata hi kiuN hey!

By: Amal

ap ki har gazal parnay ka maza he kuch aur hota

Shab-e-Hijar July 11, 2007, 7:10pm 15

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:halo: masoom kon ap ya amal

NikamiJano July 12, 2007, 3:08pm 16

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i guess Aymal ko he kah rehi hona Koyal tu chalalkoo lagti…sorry koyal mind na karna

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

NikamiJano July 12, 2007, 3:09pm 17

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AYmal :k:

rkopra July 12, 2007, 7:24pm 18

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he, who avoids my eyes, why does he cast glances at me?
he, who has to go back, why does he come near me?

he, who's is bound in rituals and is afraid he'll lose himself,
why does he please himself, playing love games with me?

ajnabi_ladki July 14, 2007, 2:19am 19

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bohot khoob. keep up the gd work

case_study July 14, 2007, 2:30am 20

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wonderful, man.