jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 1:46am

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meri daastan-e-hayaat ki ye tehreer to ik aesa bayaaN hey
jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

sar-e-bazm saarey dostoN ne meri aap-beeti suni magar
koi dil ka aalam na samajh saka go gham-zada tha har koi

tera shab-o-roz ka intizaar meri nazar sey sab kuch le urra
merey ratjagoN ke naseeb meiN ab tak nahi hey sahar koi

merey hosley bhi thak gaey ke meri rah-guzar sey bani nahi
jab raastey hoN na-meharbaaN to kya karey phir safar koi

do chaar saaNseiN aaj bhi merey paas heiN tu bhi paas aa
teri nigaahoN ki talkhiyoN meiN gar bach gayaa hey zehar koi

ye to mohabbatoN ki maang thi jo tujhey zindagi ka laqab diya
is sodey ke aevaz sanam meiN ney kab maaNga tha samar koi

tu kis leeye hey gham’zada ke ye teri hi zid thi aey hum’nawa
k kisi ki aaNkheiN nam na hoN chahey mar bhi jaey agar koi*

MaSoOm_KaBoOteR · October 21, 2003, 2:14am

nice

amirbilal · October 21, 2003, 4:42am

very nice :k:

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 10:07am

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 10:08am

V thankz..

Daagh · October 21, 2003, 10:34am

bahot khoob koyal jee :)

tu kis leeye hey gham’zada ke ye teri hi zid thi aey hum’nawa
k kisi ki aaNkheiN nam na hoN chahey mar bhi jaey agar koi

:( very nice

SuraJ · October 21, 2003, 10:54am

do chaar saaNseiN aaj bhi merey paas heiN tu bhi paas aa
teri nigaahoN ki talkhiyoN meiN gar bach gayaa hey zehar koi

ye to mohabbatoN ki maang thi jo tujhey zindagi ka laqab diya
is sodey ke aevaz sanam meiN ney kab maaNga tha samar koi

simply the best

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 10:55am

:nono:

Azad · October 21, 2003, 11:49am

Yeh kia hay

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 21, 2003, 11:56am

Re: jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

meri daastan-e-hayaat ki ye tehreer to ik aesa bayaaN hey
jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

Hum Roz paRhatay haiN :~)

WiseGuy · October 21, 2003, 12:02pm

Re: jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

BOhat khoob. :k:

Capricorn · October 21, 2003, 3:50pm

Nice :k:

chand_chehra · October 21, 2003, 4:33pm

Re: jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

beautifull :k:

B_dal · October 21, 2003, 4:33pm

tu kis leeye hey gham’zada ke ye teri hi zid thi aey hum’nawa
k kisi ki aaNkheiN nam na hoN chahey mar bhi jaey agar koi*
:(

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · October 21, 2003, 4:40pm

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 21, 2003, 4:45pm

excellent koyal jee :k:

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 11:12pm

thanks
jo hum ne dastaan apni sunaiey ap keon roo’ey

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 11:16pm

ye written by Koyal hia

PS: Aur kuch?

abc1234 · October 21, 2003, 11:20pm

:)

Koyal · October 21, 2003, 11:40pm

Re: Re: jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
meri daastan-e-hayaat ki ye tehreer to ik aesa bayaaN hey
jisey koi dil sey na sun saka jisey parrh saki na nazar koi

Hum Roz paRhatay haiN :~)
[/QUOTE]

thanks gul and welcome back kahan hoti haiN ap :)