jisay sab say chupaatay hain jisay hum roz gintay haiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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***tumhaRi yaad bhi Mohsin kisi muflis ki poonji hai
jisay sab say chupaatay hain jisay hum roz gintay haiN

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waah ji, waah...ham ishq ke maaroN kaa bas itnaa hii fasaana hai.....ham raat ko utH kar rote haiN jab saaraa aalam sotaa hai :(

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aap log to vampires yaa dracula ho gaaye :(

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hahaha...yaa ULLOO? vo bhii to raatoN meN jaagtaa hai...par i am an amreekan ulooo...the hoshiyaar one! :D

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haa haa nice one :D You are samjhdar warna mein ney likhna hi thaa

Her shakh per ullo betha hai anjaam-e-gulistan kaya ho gaa ;)

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**waah...zabardast she'r :) ek aisa hii aur bhii thaa...

Hoor kii aaGhosh meN langoor, Khudaa kii shaan?????**

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Very nice:)

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bank mein hifazat say rikhwan dein.

nice one. :k:

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Wah Wah :k:

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Bohat munfarid khayal :):k:

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bohat khoob Koyal Ji, aap ki selection bohat khoob hoti hai:-)
PS: above sh'er remind me of this

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mataa-e-jaan hain, terey qol aur qasam ki tarah

guzashtaa saal mein nay inhein gin kay rakhaa tha

kisii ghareeb kii jorii huwii raqam kii tarah

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thanks gul sharing for such a beautiful piece :)

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g KOyal jo huiwe :stuck_out_tongue:

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Acct # dain na :slight_smile: