Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity June 9, 2008, 7:06am 1

Aik Nazm,

Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain
Andaaz Buhat He Pyaray Hain

Kabhi Lekar Shokhi Ankhon Main
Meray Dil Main Halchal Ker Dena
Kabhi Meethi Meethi Baton Se
Meray Dil Ko Pagal Ker Jaana

Kabhi Kaan Ko Rakh Ke Seenay Pe
Meray Dil Ki Dharkan Sun Lena
Meray Gaal Pe Aaker Chupke Se
Kabhi Koochi Koochi Ker Jaana

Meri Aankh Pe Aanchal Ka
Rangeen Sa Saaya Ker Rakhna
Kabhi Aaker Meray Cheheray Per
Ghani Zulf Ka Baal Ker Jaana

Meray Hath Ko Lekar Hathon Main
Kabhi Apne Dil Pe Rakh Dena
Kabhi Aaker Meri Baanhon Main
Khud He Chupke Chupke Bhar Jaana

Meray Hont Pe Rakhna Hont Kabhi
Aur Rooh Meri Dehka Dena
Kabhi Apni Jheel Si Aankhon Main
Meray Pyar Ka Kaajal Ker Jaana

Iqraar Ke Lafz Sunanay Ko
Kabhi Ghanton Mujh Ko Tarsaana
Kabhi Kaan Main Meray Chupke Se
Izhaar Khud He Se Ker Jaana

Andaaz Ye Saaray Nyaray Hain
Hum Ko Jaan Se Pyaray Hain
Isi Leay To Inn Pe Hum
Apna Sab Kuch Haaray Hain

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 9, 2008, 7:53am 2

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

So sweet :-)

I wanna marry you.

redidentity June 9, 2008, 7:57am 3

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thanks Gul jee :)

S.786 June 9, 2008, 8:37am 4

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

ji.......yaqeenan pasand aai hy.........thanks

redidentity June 9, 2008, 10:38am 5

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thanks jee.. s.786 :)

Shumaisa June 9, 2008, 11:04am 6

Beeautifulll… :k:

redidentity June 10, 2008, 5:00am 7

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thank you Shumaisa :)

fizatiq June 10, 2008, 5:20am 8

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

Verrrrrrrrrrrrry Very Nice..............bohat zabardast..........thanks for sharing.....

bheegiyaad June 10, 2008, 8:49am 9

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

nice effort :k:

redidentity June 10, 2008, 9:57am 10

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

fiza and bheegs.. thanks :s

Shab-e-Hijar June 11, 2008, 3:13am 11

that's lovely :)

NikamiJano June 11, 2008, 3:47am 12

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

nice 1 red :)

redidentity June 11, 2008, 6:44am 13

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thanks Shab n Nikami Jee :)

abeeha June 11, 2008, 2:40pm 14

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

nice thoughts RI....very nicely written poem.

muncho June 11, 2008, 7:59pm 15

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

hmm pasand aaya ye andaz e mohabut, kuch kahilana sa jis main sub kuch dosra hee karay tu karay, gudest g.

moonmine June 12, 2008, 7:34pm 16

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

**Meray Gaal Pe Aaker Chupke Se
Kabhi Koochi Koochi Ker Jaana

**soooo cute.....
n
overall, a very romantic ghazal

redidentity June 13, 2008, 4:23am 17

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thanks abeeha, muncho and moonmine :@:

hiba_no.1 June 13, 2008, 1:42pm 18

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

nice sharing

~~~Missing Someone~~~

Dushwari June 14, 2008, 10:45pm 19

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

nice poem,. Ahmer.

redidentity June 15, 2008, 8:14am 20

Re: Jin Pe Hum Dil Haray Hain..

thanks Hiba and Dushwari jee :)