Jhalak!

I notice that majority of attmepts in this section try to portray feelings of the time frame when either one is madly in love OR facing the consequences of love. So i am posting ~Jhalak~, which is like a prior warning to the dangers of mohabbat.

Let me know your feedback :slight_smile:


~Jhalak~

Dour kahen ek jhalak si dikhti hay
Na janay bina bhee wo apni apni si lagti hay
Wo nazrein aur wo apnaeyat ka ehsas
Ek shub andharay mein wo roshni jessay lagti hay

Rung oskay chand talay khiltay, mein bas dekhta jaon
Nazrein jab wo ek pal jhupkae, mein weeran sa ho jaon
Sub adaaein sohani phir bhee kitnee saada si wo lagti hay

Andaaz oskay jaisay mausam aatay jaatay
Ek ek pal ko jaisay hein mujhay tarpatay
Baat ye saari kuch ajub si mujhko lugti hay

Udh-shub(midnight) roshni aur woh oska khilta aks
Dekh kar ossay sitaray bhee kartay hein raks
Malika jaisay jannat ki pariyoun ki si lagti hay

Ek lumha rukk kar khud say pocho zara!
Kya ye dikhti jhalak rahay gi sada?
NAHEE, ye jhalak tou ek khuwab hay
Haqeeqat bhala kab kahan kisi ko itni achee lagti hay?

yeh bekhoodi ka alam jo hum pe chaya hay
Azad~ Woh pora tasawar main kab samaya hay?

Adab Arz

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