Jhalak by me

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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I wrote a little piece of poetry. Your feeback will be highly appreciated.

~Jhalak~

Dour kahen ek jhalak si dikhti hay
Na janay bina bhee wo apni apni si lagti hay
Wo nazrein aur wo apnaeyat ka ehsas
Ek shub andharay mein wo roshni jessay lagti hay

Rung oskay chand talay khiltay, mein bas dekhta jaon
Nazrein jab wo ek pal jhupkae, mein weeran sa ho jaon
Sub adaaein sohani phir bhee kitnee saada si wo lagti hay

Andaaz oskay jaisay mausam aatay jaatay
Ek ek pal ko jaisay hein mujhay tarpatay
Baat ye saari kuch ajub si mujhko lugti hay

Udh-shub(midnight) roshni aur woh oska khilta aks
Dekh kar ossay sitaray bhee kartay hein raks
Malika jaisay jannat ki pariyoun ki si lagti hay

Ek lumha rukk kar khud say pocho zara!
Kya ye dikhti jhalak rahay gi sada?
NAHEE, ye jhalak tou ek khuwab hay
Haqeeqat bhala kab kahan kisi ko itni achee lagti hay?

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Haqeeqat bhala kab kahan kisi ko itni achee lagti hay?

:k:

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wah bahut khoob!

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wah bohut khoob:k: :slight_smile:

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beautiful:k:
keep it up:)

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I quite like it. Keep it up.

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nice.......

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Beautiful :k:

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A big thanks to the following people:

Azad
Lamhay
Ocean of Love
ghazal kisi ke
Pathan Bhai
Heart To Let
Capricorn

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Re: A small piece by myself

Very Nice… :flower1:

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Re: Re: A small piece by myself

:flower2: very nice :slight_smile:

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wow zabardast ji...:D