Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal July 20, 2007, 8:17pm 1

Shab-e-tanhaai ke rang

**Shab-e-tanhaai meiN sitaaroN ka libaada orrhey
teri yaadoN ke jugnu sey chamakney lagtey heiN
aur dil pe cha jaata hey khud-farebi ka aesa aalam
ke har taraf teri hi aamad ka samaaN hota hey
jesey kisi aavaaz ke dhoke meiN koi murr kar dekhey
jesey sehra meiN saraaboN ka gumaaN hota hey

…
Shab-e-tanhaai meiN mehak terey khayaaloN ki
merey tasavvur ka tavaaf sa karney lagti hey
tab phir sey khilti heiN umangoN ki laakhoN kalyaN
aur fasl-e-gul ki ye aamad to aesey lagti hey
jesey kisi dil-ruba ki aaNkh meiN iqraar ka zahoor
jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor!**

By: Amal

Dushwari July 21, 2007, 12:01am 2

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

mukarer, Amal.

goodnews July 21, 2007, 1:40am 3

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

Wah!

SJ July 21, 2007, 6:45am 4

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

Its Amazing.............
Bohat Khobsorat Alfaz Diay App nay Ik Khayal Ko.............
Awesome........
:)

tahreem_saeed July 21, 2007, 7:29am 5

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

waqai main Amal jee kafi achi koshish hai umeed hai aap agey or acha lekho gey

aanish July 21, 2007, 3:31pm 6

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

Beautiful. Very nice nazm Amal. Aap ke alfaaz bohot saada magar khubsurat hote haiN, hum jaise aam logoN kii samaj meiN aane waale. Allah bless u.

Sheal July 22, 2007, 1:52am 7

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Bohoot khoob Amal.

Shab-e-Hijar July 22, 2007, 2:22am 8

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bohat khoob :k:

show us ur HANDWRITING, plz!...it tells a lot about ur personality..its a science/art

AQ July 22, 2007, 3:23am 9

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shab-e-tanhaai
sitaroN ka libadah
yaadoN kaY jugnu
sehra maiN saraab
bay naam saa suroor

yeh tau mujhaY meraY dil kee baataiN lagtee haiN Amal... beautiful creation indeed :)

Amal July 22, 2007, 12:29pm 10

Re: Jesey kisi un-kahi si baat ka be-naam sa saroor

Dushwari, goodnews, soniaa_jee, tahreem, aanish, Sheal, Shab-e-Hijar and Anwaar Qureshi, aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya ke aap ney is nazm ko is qadar sara’ha So very nice of you all

_Masoom_Muskaan July 23, 2007, 6:40am 11

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vnice amal bhae:)

Saqi_the_angel July 23, 2007, 5:31pm 12

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very nice

Koyal July 24, 2007, 3:53am 13

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Shab-e-tanhaai meiN sitaaroN ka libaada orrhey
teri yaadoN ke jugnu sey chamakney lagtey heiN
aur dil pe cha jaata hey khud-farebi ka aesa aalam

Beautiful nazam Amal
**

ke har taraf teri hi aamad ka samaaN hota hey...which is not true though :p**

Finally Lippy's 5k

HeArT_HaCKeR July 27, 2007, 2:24pm 14

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Beautiful.. thanks for sharing Amal :)

Height and weight

Prince_Ali July 27, 2007, 6:21pm 15

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awesome :k:

Keep Smiling :-)

goodnews August 9, 2007, 1:29am 16

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Zabardast:lajawab: