~* Jeevan Jeena Chahti Hoon *~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kitni yadain hain tumhari... Masoom........ Pyari si.... Jab aik hi baat pe ghanton hanstay thay... Tum hanstay hanstay be-hal hojatay thay... Aur main.. Tumhain dekhti ... aur dekhti reh jati... Abb bhi tumhari khushbo har taraf pheli hue hai... Saanse laiti hon aur tumhain jazb ker laiti hon... Ragon main khoon ban kay dortay ho... Lamha lamha nikhar jati hon... Muskurati hon.... Sharmati hon... Suno!!! Mujhe voh lamhay, voh pal ...phir louta do... Main tumhari avaz kay sehar main phir utarna chahti hon... **Phir aik jeevan jeena chahti hon....**

By:

Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)

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Buhat khoobsurat shairee hai. Very sensitive and touch :k:

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jabardus:k:

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nice :k:

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very veryyyyyyyy nice.......keep it up.:)

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Re: ~* Jeevan Jeena Chahti Hoon *~

Wao… Its so beautiful and touchy too …:k::k::k:
Thanks for sharing Ambreen and keep it up !

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Capricorn... Thanks a lot for liking Capri :~)

Jaan Lewaa... Thanks ..Its good to see you again with your old nick :D

~~BoReD-iN-BrIsBaNe~~... Thanks :~)

Swera.... Thanks dear... mujhe nahi andaza tha ke yeh ittni pasand ki jaegi... InshaAllah I'll write in future as well... :)

Amarbail... Thanks a lot janab... thats so encouraging :~)

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keep it up Ambreen..

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Originally posted by Philanthrope: *
**Capricorn*... Thanks a lot for liking Capri :~)

Jaan Lewaa... Thanks ..Its good to see you again with your old nick :D

~~BoReD-iN-BrIsBaNe~~... Thanks :~)

Swera.... Thanks dear... mujhe nahi andaza tha ke yeh ittni pasand ki jaegi... InshaAllah I'll write in future as well... :)

Amarbail... Thanks a lot janab... thats so encouraging :~)
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I didnt know you are this much talented :)

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i actually like the last line..:) the climax of the poem:) understood by those who reached the climax already :D

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
i actually like the last line..:) the climax of the poem:) understood by those who reached the climax already :D
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:D

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Re: ~* Jeevan Jeena Chahti Hoon *~

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Originally posted by Philanthrope: *


Kitni yadain hain tumhari...
Masoom........ Pyari si....
Jab aik hi baat pe ghanton hanstay thay...
Tum hanstay hanstay be-hal hojatay thay...
Aur main..
Tumhain dekhti ... aur dekhti reh jati...
Abb bhi tumhari khushbo har taraf pheli hue hai...
Saanse laiti hon aur tumhain jazb ker laiti hon...
Ragon main khoon ban kay dortay ho...
Lamha lamha nikhar jati hon...
Muskurati hon.... Sharmati hon...
Suno!!!
Mujhe voh lamhay, voh pal ...phir louta do...
Main tumhari avaz kay sehar main phir utarna chahti hon...
**Phir aik jeevan jeena chahti hon....*

By:

Ambreen Qureshi
(Philanthrope)
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Simple Pure & Beautiful

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Mehrtaab... Thanks a lot :~)

Capricorn... Same here... I didnt knew that I am this much talented :p

Anwaar... LOlz.. well said... and thanks for liking :~)

Azad... Thats a lovely reply ... Thanks :~)

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*Originally posted by Philanthrope: *

Azad... Thats a lovely reply ... Thanks :~)
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Dil par na lain kabhi kabhi ziyada ho jati hay

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Philanthrope: *
**Mehrtaab*... Thanks a lot :~)

Capricorn... Same here... I didnt knew that I am this much talented :p

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Now that I have made u realise that, where is my treat? :)

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gr8:k:

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buhet khoob