Jeet gaye hoon!!!

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 14, 2003, 5:59am

bebus ho kar dil ke hathoon mein ne socha
aaj mein is ko phone karo gee
aur kahoo gee
mein ne tum ko lakh bohlaia
loh dil se naam tumhara lakh metaia
lekin jana! such pocho to
dil ke hatho haar gayee mein
aao ab ke bar milein to,mar kar becharein
number is ka dail kar ke
us ke naram se lehjae ke “hello” sun kar bhi
chup nahi totee
dahrak dahrak ke dil bhi machla
kuch to bolo…lab to kohlo
lekin aaj receiver rakh kar,kuch bhi na keh kar,
apne dil se
belaakhir mein jeet gaye hoon!!

Fakhra Batool

Aceones · January 14, 2003, 6:04am

nazam achee hay, lekin rawayya acha naheen, atleast mujhay naheen laga no offend plz

arifnawaz1 · January 14, 2003, 6:47am

Ek aur udaas nazm :(

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 14, 2003, 7:22am

nice:)

SunnyBoy · January 14, 2003, 7:29am

Nice :k:

Lamhay · January 14, 2003, 1:50pm

bahut khoob ghazal waqae jeet gaye hoo !

guybrush · January 14, 2003, 4:12pm

nice one

Dilsay · January 14, 2003, 4:45pm

Kitnee udasi hai....

Azad · January 14, 2003, 6:33pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Kitnee udasi hai....
[/QUOTE]

Harnay ka itna ghum nahi kartay .... GKK nay to aap se pehlay hi kaha tha .....
iss shart pe khailon gii pyar ki yeh bazi
jeeton to dilsay Hari to piya teri :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 14, 2003, 7:45pm

Aceones! i am sorry if u dont like it:(
arifnawaz agar is nazam ne apko aur udass kar diya hai to i am sorry:(
Masoom Muskaan,Sunnyboy,Lamhay,guybrush,Dilsay bohut bohut shukria pasand karne ka:flower1:
Azad thanks for the nice sher:k::)per mein ne to kuch bhi kese se nahi kaha:)ap ne kahan se sun liya

Dilsay · January 14, 2003, 7:49pm

**App ko itnay loog pasand kartay hain ab decide kar he lain… Ya gazal kisi ke hooo he jaya aab kiya khiyal hai… **

Aur ya kisi say kuch kahnay wali kiya baat hai

Azad · January 14, 2003, 8:15pm

jab hum aap hi ke paas thay to humara number dail karna .. che maani dard?

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 15, 2003, 4:02am

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 15, 2003, 4:04am

jeeeeee:eek: