jeenay ka mujhay bhi armaan tha kabhi
zaamaana mujhpay bhi meharbaan tha ka bhi
aaj roota hai baadalon main chupkar
wohi hai ye sarpe jo aasmaan tha kabhi
wo shaaq to kya shajar nahe bacha
jispar bana mera ashiyaan tha kabhi
duswaarioon say jetna mushkil banaa
yeh kaam bhi ham ko aasaan tha kabhi
kooee bhi yahaan nahee janta mujhay
yeh gaaon meray bina veraan tha kabhi
hairaan ho bedaad-e-qismat pe lamhay
iis par hamara bhi wohi emaan tha kabhi!
achhi ghazal hai Lamhey jii..
daad kubul kijiye...
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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
achhi ghazal hai Lamhey jii..
daad kubul kijiye...
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shukriya pramod ji aap hamesha yahi likhtay hain daad kabool kijye ;)
daad kabool karli thanks !
Meree taraf se bhee qubool kar leejiye :)
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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
Meree taraf se bhee qubool kar leejiye :)
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Ji zaroor capricorn ji after all im capricorn 2! :)
:k: bohat achi hai lamhay sis :k: 
You too Brutus! Now thats a news to me Nice to know that Lamhay :k:
Beautiful Lamhay :)
Re: jeenay ka mujhay bhi armaan tha kabhi!
bhut achay:k:
bhut khoob lamhay siso :k:
buht khob sister 
nice poetry
bohot knoob shayeri likhi hai.....
is it your own?
Buhat Khoob :k:
very nice :k:
excellent:k::k:
yes capricorn ji !! news 4 u strange !
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*Originally posted by arifnawaz: *
Beautiful Lamhay :)
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thanks arif nawaz ji!
Re: Re: jeenay ka mujhay bhi armaan tha kabhi!
shukriya JL ji
thanks nikki dear!
thanks muskaan