Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Thiisha-e-Ishq se Tarash mujay
Aur phir ker de pash pash mujay

Ja rahi hoon mein rohshani ki tarf
Apne saaye ki hai Talash mujay

Ab ke Zakhmi nahi hui Lekin
Dil pe ayi hai Ek Kharash mujay

Kho diya khud ko Justaju mein teri
Tu ne kerna hai ab talash mujay!!!

Meri chahat teri khushiyaan thi"Aaina"
Jan sakta khabhi tu kash Mujay!!!

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Re: Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!

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Re: Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!

Aaina be’had khoobsoorat ghazal hey:k:…thanx a lot for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

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Re: Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!

Aa’ina Jeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Yoon to na karein, phir hamein kaun pooche ga:confused:
Main to thak gaya ta’reef kar kar k:(
Ab kuch kehne ko nahi mere paas, aap ne khaali kar dia hamein.
Yaani ye koi zaruri hai k har din pehle se bhi achi poetry karne lage insaan.:eek:
Fan bana lia aapne:)
Allah khush rakhe aap ko!!!

Zara maqte k pehle misre par dhyaan dijiye. “Aa’ina” word ka wazan aaisa hai k maqton mein is ko fit karna kaafi mushkil hai lekin I know, u can do it. Waise mere paas aik suggestion hai, agar kahein to post karoon ?

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Re: Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!!!

Patharon ke Shahr main ek Aainadar....
Ghazal Ka Safar Mubarak Ho !!

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Re: Jaye kahan ye DiL!!!!!

ja rahi hoon main roshni ki taraf
apnay saay ki hai talash mujhay
superb khobsoorat lafz intekhab karti ho
love

shan