Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

being_lonely · July 8, 2007, 2:07am

Asalam u Alaikum ! How are you all ?Hope Fine So This Cute Nazm Dedicated To Seven star Bohat Mohabbaton K Sath ! Baki Log bhi parh saktay hain
Jawaab e Gulaab

Hawa ja kar usay kehna
Jo uss ne phool bhaijay thay
Inhii phooloon se ab khushbuu nahi aati
Bus uss ki yaad aati hai
Isii ki yaad main ab hum
Na jeety hain na martey hain
Bus iss ki aag main har waqat jaltey hain
Badan se jo lipat kar
Rooh tak ko jalati hai
Magar uss ko khabar hai kya
Jis ki yaad main
Tanha sulagtey hain
Ye jo khud ko jalatey hain
Usay kia yaad atey hain
Bata kuch tu
Hamein wo yaad kartey hain
Ke jis ka naam hum aksar
Sar-e-sahil likhtey hain
Jis k vasal ki khatir
Samandar ki hawaon ke sabhi dukh jhela kartey hain
Iss say kahna
Hum uss ko yaad kartey hain
Ye ankhein uss ki furqat main
Hamin ab khon rulati hain
Satati hain
Hum uss ki yaad se dil ko bohat abadd rakhtey hain
Hum uss ke loat anaY ka
Yaqeen rakhtey hain
Uss ko yaad kartey hain
Usay kehna !
Hum uss se payar kartey hain

BeInG lOnely !!! SId !!!

babri · July 9, 2007, 9:23am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

being_lonely:

Asalam u Alaikum ! How are you all ?Hope Fine So This Cute Nazm Dedicated To Seven star Bohat Mohabbaton K Sath ! Baki Log bhi parh saktay hain :p Jawaab e Gulaab

Hawa ja kar usay kehna Jo uss ne phool bhaijay thay Inhii phooloon se ab khushbuu nahi aati Bus uss ki yaad aati hai Isii ki yaad main ab hum Na jeety hain na martey hain Bus iss ki aag main har waqat jaltey hain Badan se jo lipat kar Rooh tak ko jalati hai Magar uss ko khabar hai kya Jis ki yaad main Tanha sulagtey hain Ye jo khud ko jalatey hain Usay kia yaad atey hain Bata kuch tu Hamein wo yaad kartey hain Ke jis ka naam hum aksar Sar-e-sahil likhtey hain Jis k vasal ki khatir Samandar ki hawaon ke sabhi dukh jhela kartey hain Iss say kahna Hum uss ko yaad kartey hain Ye ankhein uss ki furqat main Hamin ab khon rulati hain Satati hain Hum uss ki yaad se dil ko bohat abadd rakhtey hain Hum uss ke loat anaY ka Yaqeen rakhtey hain Uss ko yaad kartey hain Usay kehna ! Hum uss se payar kartey hain

BeInG lOnely !!! SId !!!

jawab ka jawab nahi bhai really bohut achi hai i like it.

Usay kehna !
Hum uss se payar kartey hain

bohut alaa.

Thank you.

SJ · July 9, 2007, 9:30am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

very nice :)

taliba2007 · July 9, 2007, 9:34am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

7star ab to kush ho jao chalo mere elawa b kisi ne tumare naam iteni achi nazam ki hai.

very nice poem BL.

tahreem_saeed · July 9, 2007, 9:54am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

bohat khoob sid nice sharing

redidentity · July 9, 2007, 10:07am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

Very Beautiful SiD Jee :)

Jhanjharewali · July 9, 2007, 10:39am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

wah Sid, such a lovely nazm!

m.a.d.i.h.a · July 9, 2007, 5:33pm

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

very nice!

being_lonely · July 10, 2007, 2:53am

Re: Jawaab e Gulaab Sevenstar2003 K Naam

Nawaazish Adaab u are all nice readers of poetry