Jatay howay yaa saal (my own try)

Dilsay · January 1, 2003, 8:43am

Jatay howay yaa saal hamian kiya day giya
Jo apnay thay un ke yaadain behi lay giya

Wasal to kiya hijar he tha apna
Jatay howay ya akhri umeed behi lay giya

Wo aya ga loot kar agalay baras magar
Ya kiya ka hum say wo ya aas behi lay giya

Zameen say utha kar falak par betha diya
Jatay howay wo ankh say ya khawab behi lay giya

Dilsay jo baat howee tu mahsoos ya howa
Gardishay khoon wo sadmay paroo giya…

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 9:16am

Re: Jatay howay yaa saal (my own try)

Xcellent :k::k::k:
Keep writing

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 9:38am

**
Saal kay in akheeri lamhoon mein..
Jo waqt beet chuka hai..
Baitha ussi ke rakh kuraid raha hoon..
Shayad kaheen koi Chingari...
Abhi talak sulag rahi hoo..
Shayad woh mil jaye..
Tu is sard raat mein...
Tha'thartay wajood ko..
Ek pal ko he sahee..
Par woh asooda hidaat tu milay..
Talaash jis kee sadiyoon pay mooheet rahee hai...
**

guybrush · January 1, 2003, 10:00am

nice effort
keep it up

Dilsay · January 1, 2003, 10:17am

Thanks
Arif
Guybrush

:)

Nazam · January 1, 2003, 10:41am

:k:

dil say Good one
Arif unkle app ka bhi good one hae pur app ko sub ke post men apni peotri thosnay ka shauq kiyon haee? app aleg post karein to zayida pazerae hogee

Hum_Hain · January 1, 2003, 12:25pm

bahut khoob Dil say jee! :k:

yoonhi likhte raha kijiye, kabhi umeed ki karan ko khatm to naa hone dijiye!

Amal · January 1, 2003, 1:09pm

Re: Jatay howay yaa saal (my own try)

bohat khoob:k:…keep it up:)

Azad · January 1, 2003, 4:02pm

Bohut khoob :k:

Yon dil ko her eik shakss pe wara nahi kartay
Aankon main her eik aakss utara nahi kartay
(Batool)

Philanthrope · January 1, 2003, 4:32pm

:k: Keep writing !

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 1, 2003, 6:13pm

Nice try keep it up and thanks for sharing:)

chand_chehra · January 1, 2003, 7:07pm

Niceee :k:
keep it up

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 1, 2003, 7:28pm

beautiful:k:

keep it up

arifnawaz1 · January 1, 2003, 8:21pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Nazam: *

Arif unkle app ka bhi good one hae pur app ko sub ke post men apni peotri thosnay ka shauq kiyon haee? app aleg post karein to zayida pazerae hogee ;)
[/QUOTE]

Well, Im sorry with you and also with others for disturbing thread ! Dont' worry, I'll not gonna post again !!!

Azad · January 1, 2003, 9:00pm

Arif jee itni asani se nazum ko choRna nahi acha ... aap jahan chahain Nazum ki nuk palak dorst kar kay sub se share karain .. balke aysa kartay hain .. email my heart ... aaj kal fursat hay humara dil bhi laga rahay ga or aap ka shoq bhi :)

Nazum jee

Qalum ho, taigh ho, taisha keh dhall mat chiino
Kabhi kisi say kisii ka kamal mat chiino!!!!!!!!!!!

Kushi isii may aghar hay to her khushi lay lo
yeh dukh yeh dard yeh huzn o malaal mat chiino
(wasi shah)