JANY KAYOON ....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Main naay janaay kayaa kahaa **
uss naay jannay kayaa sunaa
Faslaa donon kaay thaaa
joo darmiaan woo barrh gayaa

Chaand too mojood haay
paar chandnee madoom haay
Khoo gayee kayoon chandnee
kirnoon koo thandee kayaa hovaa

Shooq haay ankhon maain aur
charoon paay saab kaay lagan
Kissss kaay annay kee haay khabar
Dosst yeah mujh kooo bataaa

Khalid Qureshi
17.3.06

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Re: JANY KAYOON ....

Khoobsoorat kaavish hey Khalid sahab :) ... thanx for sharing with us.

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Thanks Amal .. joo khud achaa poet hoo woo kisee kay barray maain achaa kahaay tooo khushee hotee haay.

Sukhee rahoo

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Thanx for the reciprocal compliment :)
By the way Khalid sahab, jesa ke aap khud writer heiN, why don't you participate in a thread in this forum where we are discussing technical issues of writing? I am sure we will be able to exchange lots of notes throught this debate or mujh sey seekhney waaley bhi kuch na kuch pa hi leiN ge. Please manage some time :)

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Re: JANY KAYOON ....

bohet khoub :)...keep it up bechay
thx 4 sharing :)

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i like it simply:-)

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Zaraa nawazee haay aap kee ... Barebe aur Beingonly .. shukryaa

Sukhee raheen

Khalid

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Thanks a lot Amal , for ur kind words. I will sure love to be part of any fora to give a nicer look to this forum :)

Khalid

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Nice one

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Thanks. .Heart Hacker . :)

Khalid

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:k:

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Thanks Prince jee... :)