First of all, I am really thankful to all the guppies who participated in the December Topic and to all the Guppies who Voted for them and … To all the Guppies who encouraged them with their comments.
Now…! Asoolan tou BLACK MAMBA ko topic post karna tha. But he told me to Post the Topic on his behalf.
Topic for the Month of January is…
~.~ AANKHAIN (Eyes)~.~
Closing Date for the Poems will be 25th January 2005.
kuch hum juda juda sey thiey
kuch dil bhi manta na tha
woh ankhien jhuki jhuki tu thien
par
un ankhuon ki us aurrh sey
koi jhankta tu dhekta
jisey humney chaha tha kabhi
jisey humney poja tha kabhi
dil toor kar gya tha ju
muon mour kar gya tha ju
meri ankhien uski talash mei
batakh rahi hainh yahan wahan
magar
kaisey hum yeah maan lien
usey itna bhi pata nahi
key wadey ju kar gya tha woh
inn ankhuon ka sapna ban kar
abb porey na hu payien gien ..
Shukriya dost Lakin tum unwaan dene waale ho kuch to socha hoga ke kia likha jaaye wesey tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho warna ye thread nahi banatey. jo likh saktey hain wo he in baatoon ko keh saktey hain. aaik sawaal hai aap ager sab se mashwara karain ke unwaan kia hona chahey to ziada behtar hoga. chand unwaan daalo aur poocho ke is main se koun se unwaan per ghazal likhni chahey. ya phir sab se ye keh do ke jo unwaan dia jaaye us per he likho jesa ke tum ne Aankhain likh dia. kisi aik ki marzi per nahi. jeetne wala decide na karey ke kia naya unwaan hona theek hai. kuch ghazalain apne apne khayalaat ke mutabiq likhi jaati hain. aur sab yahaan per apna apna khayaal likhtey hain aur mujhey faqar hai ke sab dost jo likhtey hain wo kaafi qabil hain aur koi kisi ke chori nahi karta main ne ye dekha hai ke sab ka andaaz alag aur khayaal alag hai. main shaied ye site kisi waqat chord doon mager kabhi bhoolonga nahi ke itne qabil loog meri zindagi ka aik hissa baney.
aur haan jab unwaan paish karo to dead line bhi de do joke har mah ki 5 tareek ho iske dauraan ager vote barabar ke hoon to tum khud faisla karo kioyun ke ye tumhara Idea hai.
Take a deep look into my eyes
A glance alone wont reveal my life
Deep as the ocean as exposed as the skies
Dive within and my heart you will find
Windows to my soul are these two eyes
A life time of pain and sorrow they do hide
When I affix them to you, do they hypnotize?
Let us together now bring our dreams alive
Compare them to the stars in the sky
They will guide you and put your fears aside
Do they still sparkle and mesmerise?
You are my vision i have finally realised
If ever you doubt, remember my eyes
The truth, so naked, in them you will find
I promise they will never tell you lies
But let not my words make our love blind
Lying together, i feel safe, and close my eyes
Do we dream same the dream?
It is more than what we could fantasize
A lifetime of happiness and dreams coming alive!!!
Sandleen you are a Good poet I like your poetry.
ye bachpana chordo aur doosroon ko hausla dilaao. tumhari kaamiyabi sirf dosroon ki tareef karne main he nazar aaygi. apni tareef karne waala sirf khush fehmi ka shikaar hota hai. main auroon ke hunar ki tareef is liye karta hoon ke mujhye andaza hai ke sab apne apne khayaal ko shaairi main zahir kartey hain kaafiye nahi mila saktey to kiya hua dil ke baat to keh saktey hain aur shaairi ka asal maqsad dil ke baat kehna hota hai kisi bhi lafaaz main kehdo. samajhne waale ko ishara kaafi hota hai.
try not to Discourage other people if you want to be Encouraged in your art.
Hum tak tapish pohanchti tab jaltay na han itna zaroor hai kay aey kaaash hum bhi shairi ker saktay :(. khair ker nahi saktay perh to saktay hain na, again thanks for such a nice piece.