Janai wo us shaab soya bhi hoga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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:smack: :smack2: yaaaar matlab poem is still yours, my addition and edits dont make it mine. samjhi ab :hoonh:

nahien samjhi tu phir koi duwayee wagaira karayoo :stuck_out_tongue: koi dam darood :~) koi taveez shaveez :hehe: merey bas ki baat nahien :snooty:

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hehe..aa gai samajā€¦:smiley:

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mein tehk hoon tum:hug:

aur kahan rehte ho aaj kal:teary1: :kiss:

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main bhi theak :slight_smile:

aur aaj kal Iā€™m in dream~World
:sleep2:

j/k

yehin hoti na:)

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:)

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Re: Janai wo us shaab soya bhi hoga

Beautiful..very original thoughtā€¦I can see that you are very choosy in wordsā€¦ Love it..:smiley:

Waissay meri Dastaā€™n ka naam Hai.. **Wasal-o-Hijar ka Rahi ** :roman:

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

hehe..aa gai samaj....:-D
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kaafi jaldi samjh aati aap ko :p

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Nice :k:

Wo jo roya na tha kabhi us nai apnai ansooN ko kesai roka ho ga
Yai saab youN hatam ho jayai ga, us nai kabhi yai kaab socha ho ga!

Haan socha bhi tu bilkul nahee tha :stuck_out_tongue:

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bhut achay:k:

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:crying:

Sad one Sis ā€¦ :frowning:

Nice work :k:

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Re: Re: Janai wo us shaab soya bhi hoga

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*Originally posted by Ajnabi4ever: *

Beautiful..very original thought...I can see that you are very choosy in words.... Love it..:D
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Hmm.choosy.......am I? or not? pata nai!
BTW,
Thank you! very much!

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ji, jiā€¦Allhamdolillah:queen:

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Thanks!

butā€¦:konfused:

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Shukria:)

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Thank u,
or ro to nahiN na:flower1:

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Just beautiful !
-Salman

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*Originally posted by SalmanNY: *
Just beautiful !
-Salman
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Thanksssss salman bhai:)

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butā€¦ ??
why konfused??

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

but... ??
why konfused??
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Nothing!
:)

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

Nothing!
:)
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Good. :)