JAMAL EEY YAAR .....

Dear friendz I confess that I am not a poet who can WRITE his own poetry by will … I am a poet of AMMAD only . .. I write when words come to me…if you give me a “Mirah Tarah” I cannot expand on it…
I had written two sharr and now something more has been revelaed .. soo paashh karr rhaa hoon…

Dekha Jamal eey yarr to sajda adda keya
Tujh koo banany wally uss takhliq kar kaa

Waizz naay aa kay youn kaha , ay mard ey kam aqal
**Yeah too faqat eek akss haay jamal eey yarr kaa **

ho roba roo joo too so main dekhon umar bhar
itna saa mudaa haay dil eey baay qarar kaaa

Kulfat kahaan yeah too haay alaam saroor kaaa
haay wasal say bhee lutf siwaa intizarr kaaa

day kaay too dekh jagha mujhy appny paoon maain
Kfir hoon joo dekhoon phir mainn mukh bahar kaaa

Khalid woo manzar akhooo main rach sa gaya hay joo
thaa mereee justajoo kaa aur usss kaay payaar kaaa

Khalid Qureshi
23-4-06

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wah wah...keep it up.... nice one!!

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Thanks Frozenfire.... :)
Khlaid

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Beautiful.

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Very nice ,thanks a lot for sharing your work:-)

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Veryyy nice Kalid .Rawani kiya khne.bohat mozoon or khobsoorat.thanx for sharing.:)

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mashAllah… bouhat he achy… bus touRi se prob reading maiN hoti hai lemme chege it… i hope it would be easy to read after that… :slight_smile:

Dekha Jamal-e-yaar to sajda ada kiya
Tujh ko banany waly uss takhleeq kar ka

Wai’z nay aa kay youN kaha, ay mard-e-kam aqal
Yeh to faqat ik aks hay jamal-e-yaar ka

ho ro-ba-ro jo tum tu maiN daikhoN umar bhar
itna sa mud’aa hay dil-e-beqarar ka

Kulfat kahaN yeh to hay aalam saroor ka
hay wasal say bhe lutf siwaa intizarr ka

day kay to dekh jagha mujhy apny paooN maiN
Kafir hooN jo dekhooN phir maiN mukh bahar ka

Khalid woh manzar aakhoN maiN rach sa gaya hay jo
thaa meri justujo ka aur uss kay payar ka.

its really nice… thanks for sharing… and keep it up.. :k:

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Pazeeraee kaa shukreya .. Amal , Gul , Shahana jee and AsSweetAs ( I wish u tell us AS WOT :) )

Sukhee raheen

Khalid Qureshi

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AS YOU… :hug:

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Boht khoob :flower1:.

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Zabardast :k:

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mashallah! ... ummda tehreer hai ...
sher'on mein gehrai bhi hai aur saachai bhi ...
kalaam sufiana bhi hai aur ashiqana bhi ...
well done ...

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Ahsaan marry "Kalam" paay tumhara haay dostoo .. :) :)

Khalid Qureshi

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Buhat khoob ,, BUhat acha kaha hai ji apne,,,

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Thanks Miss Farooqui ... .:)

Khalid