jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

reet June 16, 2006, 4:44am 1

**Tum jo ho saath to hai zindagi aise
jaise koi khwaab ko hi sach keh dey

ab muhabat mere liye laazmi ho gayee hai
is baare mein dil mein uthey hai sawaalaat aise

ab talak to saahil se nazaara karte the
kyon na musafir ek baar is dariyaa mei beh ke dekhen

tumhein kho dene ke baad yeh ehsaas hua hai
bagair anjaam soche tumse ek baar haal -e- dil kehte

teri raftaar ko mai kabhi naap hi nahi paaya
zindagi ruk gayee hai teri simt behte behte**

Prince_Ali June 16, 2006, 1:38pm 2

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

Very nice :k:

Last person to answer this post wins!!!!

EEMAAN June 17, 2006, 1:27am 3

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

nice one..

reet June 18, 2006, 4:56am 4

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

thnx to both of you liking it..........!

mahamkhan June 18, 2006, 9:11am 5

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

bohat khoob....!

reet June 22, 2006, 4:19am 6

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

^thnx

Sannan June 22, 2006, 5:38am 7

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

buhat zabardust ...keep sharing

MazhaR_IqbaL June 22, 2006, 6:04am 8

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

nice

reet June 25, 2006, 4:40am 9

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

thnx to both of you…

happy_dani June 25, 2006, 10:54am 10

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

bohat khooob....very nice

Bewafai June 27, 2006, 9:41am 11

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

ZAberdast Reet ji,,,,,

Jesey kisi khuwab ko koi sach keh de.....
Wahh wahh wahhh

decent_Felow June 27, 2006, 9:38pm 12

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

Bhoooooot khooooooooob reeeeeet jiiiiii

reet July 3, 2006, 9:10am 13

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

thnx to everyone for liking it.........!

sunny_nicky July 4, 2006, 4:03am 14

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Daanie July 5, 2006, 10:00pm 15

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

very nice :)

sad_affect July 6, 2006, 6:23pm 16

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

Beautiful

reet July 7, 2006, 4:20am 17

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

thnkew so much...........!

farooqahmad July 7, 2006, 10:13am 18

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

Very nice. thanks.

reet July 9, 2006, 10:56am 19

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

^thnx…

usman22 July 9, 2006, 10:50pm 20

Re: jaise koi khwaab ko ho sach keh dey

acha likha hai...