-- Jaisay uRtay Huvay Auraaq ParaishaaN --

AQ · December 21, 2003, 7:37am

A very old but gold:)

**Ab kay tajdeed-e-wafa kaa nahiN imkaaN, jaanaaN** Yaad kiya tujh ko dilaaieN tera pemaaN, jaanaaN

YouN hee Mausam kee adaa dekh kar yaad aayaa
kiss Qadar jald badal jaatay haiN InsaaN, jaanaaN

Zindagi teri ataa thee, so teray naam kee hay
Humm nay jaisay bhee basar kee, tera ehsaaN jaanaaN

Dil yeh kehtaa hay kay shayad ho fasurdah tu bhee
Dil kee kiyaa baat karaiN, Dil tau hay naadaaN, jaanaaN

MuddatouN say yehi aalam, na tawaqqau, naa umeed
Dil pukaaray hee chalaa jaataa hay, JaanaaN JaanaaN

Hum bhee kiyaa saadaa dil thay, hum nay bhee samajh rakhaa thaa
Ghum-e-DauraaN say judaa hay Ghum-e-JaanaaN, jaanaaN!

Ab kay kuch aisee sajee mehfil-e-yaaraaN, jaanaaN
Sar ba zaanu hai, koie sar ba graibaaN, jaanaaN

Har koie apni hee aawaaz say kaaNp uThtaa hay
Har koie apnay hee saaye say haraasaaN, jaanaaN!

Jiss ko dekho wohi zanjeer-e-paa lagtaa hay
Shehr kaa Shehr huvaa daakhil-e-zindaaN, jaanaaN

Ab tera zik’r bhee shahayad hee ghazal maiN aaye:)
“Aur say Aur huvay Dard kay unwaaN, jaanaaN” :~)

Hum kay rooThi huvee ruut ko bhee manaa laitay thay
Hum nay dekhaa hee naa thaa Mausam-e-HijraaN, jaanaaN!

Hosh aayaa tau sub hee khuaab thay rezaa rezaa
Jaisay uRtay huvay Auraaq paraishaaN, jaanaaN

Ahmed Faraz

Capricorn · December 21, 2003, 10:04am

Poetic idealism at its best :k:
I always loved “Jaanan Jaanan” for its poetic intellectualism.

cuteepie · December 21, 2003, 12:06pm

awesome :k:

Subha · December 21, 2003, 1:59pm

Hosh aayaa tau sub hee khuaab thay rezaa rezaa
Jaisay uRtay huvay Auraaq paraishaaN, jaanaaN

:k: always love this gazal “JaaN-e-JaanaN”
thanks for sharing …

aks-e-khushbo · December 21, 2003, 6:26pm

**Dil ye kehta hai k shaed fersuda ho tu bhee
dil ki kia baat kerein dil tu hai nadaN janaaN

awwal awwal ki mohabbat k nashay yaad tu ker
bay-piye bhee tera chahra tha gulistaN janaaN**

AQ · December 21, 2003, 8:01pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by aks-e-khushbo`: *
**Dil ye kehta hai k shaed fersuda ho tu bhee
dil ki kia baat kerein dil tu hai nadaN janaaN*

[/quote]
shair kaa wazan aur behr theek nahiN rahaa.. sahih sher yeh hay:

Dil yeh kehtaa hay kay shayad ho fasurdah tu bhee
Dil kee kiyaa baat karaiN, Dil tau hay naadaaN, jaanaaN

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by aks-e-khushbo`: *
**awwal awwal ki mohabbat k nashay yaad tu ker
bay-piye bhee tera chahra tha gulistaN janaaN*
[/QUOTE]
thanks for giving me one more shair :) i did not have it :-)

Shab-e-Hijar · December 21, 2003, 8:45pm

one of fav ghazal :k:
thanks for sharing

AQ · December 21, 2003, 11:13pm

mine too :roman:

Azad · December 22, 2003, 5:45am

hummm

aks-e-khushbo · December 22, 2003, 6:30am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
shair kaa wazan aur behr theek nahiN rahaa.. sahih sher yeh hay:

Dil yeh kehtaa hay kay shayad ho fasurdah tu bhee
Dil kee kiyaa baat karaiN, Dil tau hay naadaaN, jaanaaN
[/quote]

mere pas jaisa likha tha mein ne waisa hee yahan likh dala, anyways thanks for correcting me

[quote]

thanks for giving me one more shair :) i did not have it :-)
[/QUOTE]

NP :)

AQ · December 22, 2003, 6:39am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aks-e-khushbo`: *

thanks for correcting me

[/QUOTE]
NP :)

SunnyBoy · December 22, 2003, 7:30pm

:k:

system · December 23, 2003, 10:10am

zabardast :k::k:

AQ · December 26, 2003, 6:48pm

Thank you :-)

Muslim_Queen · December 27, 2003, 9:23pm

:k:

Dania · December 28, 2003, 3:47am

hmmmm… :k:

WiseGuy · December 28, 2003, 6:45am

Nice one of my favorite... Lemme add one more missing shair.

awwal awwal kee mohabbat kay nashay yaad to kar
Bay piye bhee tera chehra tha gulistaan jaanaaN

Aakhir aakhir to yeh aalam hai keh ab hosh naheeN
Rag e meena sulag uThee keh rag e jaaN jaanaaN

Diva · December 28, 2003, 9:55am

Impressive Anwar :k:

AQ · December 29, 2003, 2:45am

ohh wow… thanks bhai

WiseGuy · December 29, 2003, 6:12am

You are welcome Anwaar Unkil.