JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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jab yaad ata hai naam tera
toh ankhain num si ho jain
mere reste sare bhattke se
or rahain gum si ho jain
meri ratain andheri banjer si
per jab thamo tum hath mera
toh bagh-e-iram si ho jain
kabhi ak janam mai serab na hon
kabhi saat janam si ho jain
ruh bhi ghayal ghayal si
or dil bhi toota toota sa
phir saaz bana ye tootna sa
or ankhain rim jhim si ho jain
inn yadon ko dafnana hai
jin yadon se mai khoon ro-oon
per mujh se kaise hoga ye
jab ye tum he tum si ho jain…

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Re: JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA...

very nice

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Bhat he hasaas feeling Shazia … you are improving day by day :lajawab:

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Re: JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA...

Umda koshish hai Shazia keep writing good poetry best of luck !

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Bahut khoob and keep 'em coming … :k:

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bahut khoob likha hai....hamaara man-pasand

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good going shazia... keep it up..

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:aisha: very nice

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Re: JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA...

thanx ppl,thank u all of u.

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Re: JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA…

Beautiful Words as Usual Shazia..:k:

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hummm

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very nice:dannyboy:

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acha khayaal hay..thnx for sharing & keep up.

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:biggthumb:

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Re: JAB YAD ATA HAI NAAM TERA...

Thanx 4 likin ppl.

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^

u should say thanx 4 likin my poetry pplz :D

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its really cool