jab tum hee, tum na rahi to

jonaid · December 30, 2009, 9:17am

jab tum hee, tum na rahi to main bhi main , main na raha
na tumne zaroori samjha kuch sunna or na mene kuch kaha
kia ehdeo paaymaan they kia wadey they kia iqraar they
or ab? ab to jese in jaisa hum dono main kuch bhi na raha
kabhi wakt miley to sochna apne dil ko bhi zara tatolna
kesi chahat thi jo wakt-e- judai ankh se ik aanso bhi na baha
mujhe ye gamm nahi ke mene tujhe paney se pehley kho dia
jonaid ranj ye ke me ujraa to khud tere paas bhi akhir kia raha

maya7492 · December 30, 2009, 2:09pm

Re: jab tum hee, tum na rahi to

:)
nice one

jonaid · December 30, 2009, 7:27pm

thx maya ji

Muhammad_Adeel · December 30, 2009, 8:37pm

**nice .. :k: **

jonaid · December 30, 2009, 8:48pm

thx adeel ji

porcelain_doll · December 30, 2009, 9:16pm

Re: jab tum hee, tum na rahi to

very nice poetry:lajawab:

jonaid · December 30, 2009, 9:23pm

thx doll ji