Jab subha ka bhoola shaam dhaley ghar aaey ga tab deikheiN ge

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Jab ishq ka baadal dard ki baarish barsaey ga tab deikhein ge
sab hijr-o-wisaal ke reley meiN beh jaey ga tab deikheiN ge

abhi manzar sarey dilkash heiN aNkhoN meiN inko rehney do
jab khoon ke aansu dil hum ko rulwaaey ga tab deikheiN ge

ye rastey kahaan ko jaatey hein yahaan thokar kesey lagti hey,
jab apni zubaN meiN waqt hum ko samjhaey ga tab deikhein ge

madhosh heiN palkeiN masti mein madhosh hi inko rehney do
jab toot ke khaab nigahoN meiN chub jaaey ga tab deikheiN ge

wo rotey heiN apni haalat par jo tokney par kabhi kehtey they,
dil pyaar ke kheil tamaashoN sey bhar jaey ga tab deikheiN ge

dil torr ke jaaney waaley ko waapis paa kar kya karna hey,
jab subha ka bhoola shaam dhaley ghar aaey ga tab deikheiN ge

By: Amal

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:slight_smile: v nce amal bhae mue yei 3 shers boht ache lege :k:

* IF ABOVE PERSON SAY I LOVE U *
* IF ABOVE PERSON SAY I LOVE U *
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NO words again ..lo me a gaye lakin dekho gay kesay Aymal pic tu saath laa'ee nahi :D

Who would you adopt as your camel?
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very nice, nazm, Amal.

inspired, i wrote

noorani chahet ko sada pa-mal kiya, ga ra'd kiya - aye dil na bojhel ho, 'suno'!
kabhee teirey kakh key putley ka dil jeb yeklekht bedley ga, teb dekhein gey

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**Beautiful & Expressive As Ever ! :clap: **

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App ko samajh aa gaee thee in shairon ki???:faizy:

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Bohat zabardust Amal…
Graet Ghazal as Usaual…
waisay dekhnay …dikhanay mein waqt barbaad ho jata hai…:cb:
Over all umdaa tahreer hai…:k:

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g g amal bhae ne asan urdu meyn samgaia tah islie a gae :naraz:

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i`m waiting for your next one C:

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dil torr ke jaaney waaley ko waapis paa kar kya karna hey,
jab subha ka bhoola shaam dhaley ghar aaey ga tab deikheiN ge

What will I get
from a dhokhaydaar mehboob
who runs after another mehbooba
and comes back home and pachtaata hai?

When, lost in the morning
he gets senses in the evening
and returns back home,
then I will see and tell him:
get lost buster!

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Niceeee :k:

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Kabhi Kabhi Jhalak parti hein yunhi Aankein
Udaas honay ka koyi sabab nahi hota
Mein Waaldein ko ye baat kaisay Samjhaon
Muhabaton mein Hasb Mansab nahi Hota

Mising her because sometime the things get out of your control. But all this is due to the bad decisions of your parents who unable to read what is in your EYES and HEART. The Gap between our faimlies can never be crossed if you dont try to cross it.

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very nice.. :)

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zeroore nehe mehbooba he ho koe dost ka ziker bhe ho sektah he ider :snooty:

Coleslaw recipe ..
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beautiful......................

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bhut khoob amal bhai
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keep writin

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Wasay tu sari ke sari he achi hai magar ya wahh kiya baat hai... Khush rahoo

dil torr ke jaaney waaley ko waapis paa kar kya karna hey,
jab subha ka bhoola shaam dhaley ghar aaey ga tab deikheiN ge