Jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai

Hi everyone!

I really love this message board and all of the poetry is very nice. Keep it up.

Meri taraf se ek chotta sa nazraana qabool karen, umeed karti hoon ke ap (parhen ge) aur ap ko acha lage: (Shayad aap ne pehle bhi parha ho.)

~Kaliyon jaisa rang shagufta, phoolon jaisi kaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai,

Us ke chehre ki narmi se phool jawani maangen,
Us ki roshan aankhon se raaten bhi kahaani maangen,
Chalne ka andaaz hai woh, maujen bhi rawaangi maangen,
Sab ki aankhon par woh rangeen sapna ban ke chhaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai

Logon ka to kaam hai woh sholon ko hawa dete hain,
Chhoti chhoti baaton ka afsaana bana dete hain,
Woh jis raste se bhi guzre us ko sada dete hain,
Woh ghar se kam hi nikle yeh hum ne ussey samjhaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shaher mein aaya hai

Mere haathon mein hai jaise us ke haathon ki khushbu,
Meri tanhaai mein jaise us ki baaton ki khushbu,
Mere sheron mein hai jaise us ki saanson ki khushbu,
Us hi ke liye hain ghazlen, nazmen, shayar jis ne humen banaaya hai,
Neenden ur gayin sab logon ki jab se woh shahar mein aaya hai…

Thanks

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oh wow… wut a coincidence - just listened to it today in Pankaj Udhas’ voice.

Good One !

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nice 1

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welcome here

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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~

Wah Ji Wah , Buhat hi Ache , Keep it up

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Buhat khoob ji very nice ghazal keep it up

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Nice 1… bhouhat khoob..

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aur ab hum umeed rakhtyN haiN k aap aainda bhe post karyN gaiN…

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Kya baat hai!

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Aap ki pehli he entry zabardast hai. Plz keep it up!

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Kambakht Ishq!

wow

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zabardast hai,
kamaal ka hai,
bohat hi acha hai,

its just zabardast yaar

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and welocme aboard

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kja ab bhie waha raja rani
ke kisse dadi sunatie hai

Very nice J-e-G

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

bery bery bery bery bery bery
Guuuuuuuuuuud

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“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”