Jab nahi rahounga meh toh tumhay yaad ayengay yeh pal.
Pal jab meh muskuraya karta tha.
Pal jab hum haath pakarkay saath chala kartay thay.
Pal jab tum meray ansoon khushk kiya karti thein.
Pal jab meh tumhay hasaya karta tha.
Pal jab meh tumhari goud meh sar rakhkay sukoon ki saans liya karta tha.
Pal jab hum kareeb hua kartay thay.
Pal jab hum eik hua kartay thay.
Yaad ayengay tumhay yeh pal jab nahi rahounga meh.
Re: Jab nahi rahounga.........pal.......
does anyone think that its good?
Re: Jab nahi rahounga…pal…
Ye it is good… 
I dont know abt others wat ppl like in Poems… BUT apart from all technicalities… I like the theme in the Poems… So it is GOOD :k:
Re: Jab nahi rahounga.........pal.......
thanx gs
i am trying to work on my technicalitites