Jab naam teraa pyaar se likh tii hain ungaliyaan !

MANAN · January 3, 2004, 5:40pm

Jab naam teraa pyaar se likh tii hain ungaliyaan

Meri taraf zamaane ki uTh tii hain ungaliyaan

Daman sanam ka hath main aaya tha eik pal

Bus eik us hi pal se mahektii hain ungaliyaan

Jis din se duur ho gaye us din se hi sanam

Bas din tumhaare aane ke ginati hain ungaliyaan

Patthar taraash kar na banaa taaj ek nayaa

Fan_kaar ki zamaane mein kaTatii hain ungaliyaan

SuraJ · January 3, 2004, 7:28pm

bahut khoob

Capricorn · January 3, 2004, 7:48pm

:k:

cuteepie · January 4, 2004, 1:50am

:k:

MANAN · January 4, 2004, 10:04am

Thanxs Suraj,Capri and cute pie

Amarbail1 · January 7, 2004, 5:40pm

Poetry written by yourself ?

B_dal · January 8, 2004, 11:19pm

:k:

Dania · January 9, 2004, 12:11am

beautiful

MANAN · January 9, 2004, 5:11am

Thanxs Dania And Badal

Amarbail yeh ik humare pyare ne humein send ki thi tu aap se share kar lii and thanxs :)

Azad · January 9, 2004, 5:14am

nice, thanks for sharing

MANAN · January 9, 2004, 5:24am

u r always welcome azad bhai....

AQ · January 9, 2004, 5:28am

nice choice :-)

Amarbail1 · January 9, 2004, 7:32pm

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*Originally posted by MANAN: *
Amarbail yeh ik humare pyare ne humein send ki thi tu aap se share kar lii and thanxs :)
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Alrite... but dont you think it shud b posted in the forum Intekhab ?

MANAN · January 10, 2004, 4:12pm

mein amarbail ji abhi itna purana nahi hua aur mujhe nahi tha pata agay se ihteyaat kare gaye ....ok:) and thanxs AQ