Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Pramod · March 4, 2003, 6:11am

kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot…

Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii
Mere dil ne aisii choT kabhee khaaii na thii

Barish ki bundoN meiN gar tere ashq ki tapish ho
Oos saal maine bhii phir eid manaayee na thii

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

chaand es dunia meiN misaal e husn rahe
zulf yehi soNch rukh se oos ne hataii na thii

Philanthrope · March 4, 2003, 7:58am

Lovely… khoobsorat alfaz bohat khobsorti se use kiye hain aapnay…
very deep and touchy…
keep writing… :k:

and thanks for sharing with us

ameen · March 4, 2003, 9:06am

very nice
ache koshish hay

Amal · March 4, 2003, 1:31pm

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Pramod bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey:k: It’s
really nice to read it. Thanx a lot for sharing with us:)

nikii · March 4, 2003, 1:35pm

bhut khoob pramod bhai :k: thxs 4 sharing

Dilsay · March 4, 2003, 1:52pm

very nice really very nice....

hanie · March 4, 2003, 4:26pm

*ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN
sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii*

bohat acha likha haye aap ne.. :-)

chand_chehra · March 4, 2003, 4:48pm

bohat khoob pramod gi :k:
thanko for sharing

weteyes82 · March 4, 2003, 11:42pm

a beautiful ghazal..buhat achhi koshish hai :k:
keep up the good work:k:

Pramod · March 5, 2003, 6:03am

Thanks a lot P}{ä®mä©Ï§t for your inspiring words.

Pramod · March 5, 2003, 6:12am

Re: Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

Thanks a lot Amal. Any good word from a really good shaayar of your kind boosts my confidence a lot.

Pramod · March 5, 2003, 6:14am

honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya ameen,nikki,Dilsay,hanie,chaand jii and weteyes82.

NikamiJano · March 5, 2003, 11:55am

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

[/QUOTE]

bohat khoob thanks 4 sharin Pra g..:)

ullujii · March 5, 2003, 1:14pm

yeah its realy nice :k: bohoot khoob

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 5, 2003, 2:50pm

Re: Jab mere ishq ko tere dard kii rahnumaai na thii

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
kuchh samay pahle ye ghazal likhii thii main ne..
I will be waiting for your valuable feedback which really inspirs me a lot...

Bahot majboor tha wo shaksh jo tujh se juda hua
oos kii zaat mein warna kaheeN bewafaai na thii

ujaDe aashiyeiN pe ab kyoN nashaad hai tu dil
ye aag kisi aur ne to lagaaii na thii

aaj khafa ho kii maiN manziloN se bhatkaa hooN

sahii raah tumne bhii to mujhee dikhaaii na thii

[/QUOTE]

Beautiful, keep it up and Thanks for sharing :-)

Pramod · March 5, 2003, 9:28pm

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Nikami Bahna, ullujii and GuL-e-Tasbeeh
.

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 5, 2003, 9:39pm

bohtu khobsoorat aur deep likhtee hain ap:k::k::k:
keep writing and keep sharing:flower1:

Pramod · March 6, 2003, 5:29am

Shukriya GKK . aap ne meri ghazal pasand kii, mujhe achha laga.
eik baat..I am not a girl…I never heared the name Pramod as a girl…soncha aap kii ye galatfahmii bii door hii kar dooN maiN..I am a man…
anyways..thanks…

Jharna_jhankar · March 6, 2003, 7:54am

bahut khoobsorat ghazal ~

Pramod · March 6, 2003, 6:57pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Jharna~jhankar: *
bahut khoobsorat ghazal ~
[/QUOTE]

aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jharna jii