JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

gujmon · January 20, 2006, 11:59am

KISS DOSH SI KISS DA NAHIN SII
EH GALAN HOON KARAN DEAN ANHIN
WELEH LANG GAE TOBBA WAALE RAATAN HONKE PARAN DEAN NAHIN
JO HOEA EH HONA EI SEE HONI KADI WI RUK DI NAHIN
GAL JEH EK WAARI TUR PAWEH FAER CHEETI KEETEAN MUK DI NAHIN
KUJ UNJH WEE RAHWAN AUKHIAN SAN KUCH GAL WICH GHAMAN DA TAUQ VEE SEE
KUJ SHEHAR DE LOAG VEE ZAALAM SAN KUJH SAANON MARAN DA SHAUQ VEE SI

system · January 20, 2006, 2:38pm

Re: JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

lolzzzz i wrote last verse in ur another threa zindgee

yeh Totay totay kion ker diya poem ko?

adhee idher adhe udher !

gujmon · January 26, 2006, 11:02am

Re: JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

Hamna dear
jab ghar hi choot gea to phir perfaction kahan

SHALA MUSAFFAR KOI NA THEEVE
KAKH JINNAHAN TOON BHAARE HOO
wesse mera kheal hae keh esse hi hae
any way dear i r eally appreciate your choice. you got very artistic choice

jaan_f · January 26, 2006, 2:50pm

Re: JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

very touching

Amal · February 4, 2006, 3:15pm

Re: JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

gujmon...how do you pronounce your nick by the way?

khushaab · February 5, 2006, 4:45pm

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nakhan · February 6, 2006, 6:36am

Re: JAB GHAR CHORE DEA

achi ho gi, bohot mushkil say tohori si samajh aai hay

gujmon · February 9, 2006, 5:49am

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Emerged from urdu and french
emerged from pakistan and canada:)