jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Yun to ye meri thodi puraani ghazal hai..but i don’t know if I have posted it before..however, just have a look and see if I could make some sense…your feedbacks are really invaluable for me…

jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare
ab khud hii marna seekheNge, sanam se adaawat kaun kare

tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

tum rahte ho jis bastii meiN, wahaaN log ishq ke dushman haiN
maiN pyaar to tumse kar looNga, par eskii himaayat kaun kare

ye mera chiraage e dil jo tum, kab ka jalaa kar bhool gaye
toofaaN e jafaa se ab es, naadaaN kii hifaazat kaun kare

kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD dii ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare

koi shaayar hai diwaana hai , kahte haiN chaand pe marta hai
aise diwaane aashiq pe , duina meiN inaayat kaun kare

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Very nice... thanks for sharing...

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wah !!!
pramod lajavab:k::k:
Ghazal of March to lena ka irada nahi hai;)
anyways thanks for sharing:~)

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Wah…very Nice effort Pramond :k:
Keep writing… b/w whats the meaning of your nick?

Lolz @ Gazal kisi ki

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Pramod wa’qai bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey:k:
Nice to read it:) Aur haaN, ghazal kisi ke
ney theek kaha… is baar bhi Ghazal Of The Month
leney ka iraada hey kya? :wink: … Anyway, keep it up:)

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Amal jee:crying:
**ghazal kisi ke **not gjazal kisi ke:crying:
ap ne kaheen saby ke sath to time guzarna suro nahi kar diya hai:bummer:
aur hum to hamesa he sahee kehtay hain yeh aur baat hai ke koi manta nahi:teary1:

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Beautiful Ghazal, Aap kii ab taq Post kii jaanay waali Poetry meiN say i like this one. Keep sharing.

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Beautiful:)...

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Oops…sorry:( … I corrected it:)

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Wah Pramod, buhat achee ghaal hai. I loved it :k:

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ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Dilsay ,BrokenSky aur Perfectionist.

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ye to aap ki zaraa navaazi hai gkk warna mere likhne mein aisii koi baat nahin. phir bhi aap ke ye alfaaz bahot door tak meri rahbarii karenge…
bahot bahot shukriya aap ka…

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ghazal pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya ** P}{ä®mä©Ï§t **
mera naam Pramod eik hindi alfaaz hai jiska matlab hota hai happiness yaani khushii…
waise aap ke screen name se mujhe bahot pareshaani hoti hai..matlab jaan ne ka honsla bhii nahin hai mujh meiN…

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Amal Sahab,

your words of always encouragement means a lot to me.
Thanks a lot once again…

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:k: Pra g thanks 4 sharin..:slight_smile:

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wahhhh waqiii bhut zaberdasttt ghazal ha :k:

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wah wah pramod:k:…bahut aala hae…maza aa geya:)

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apke:bummer: say tum:smash:hug
aise koi baat nahi hai.agar koi acha likhay ga to mein aur her koi use zarr pasand karay ga.tum ne acha likhe hamein pasand aya aur i hope that ur ghazal will nominate for the** ghazal of March**:~)agar Amal ne koi post na ke to:bummer::~)
anyway bohut achee likhe hai aur ise trha likhate raho:~)

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:frowning: aaj kal to loog mera mazak urana lagay hain:crying::smiley:

Amal no sorry:smash::~)

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ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya paglee jii,nikki and Mahvar