jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai ....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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eik baar phir apnii eik nayee ghazal se saath aap logon ke saamne aaaya hoon..hamesha kii tarah aap ke comments ka intezaar rahega…

jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare
ab khud hii marna seekheNge, sanam se adaawat kaun kare

tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

tum rahte ho jis bastii meiN, wahaaN log ishq ke dushman haiN
maiN pyaar to tumse kar looNga, par eskii himaayat kaun kare

kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare

koi shaayar hai diwaana hai , kahte haiN chaand pe marta hai
aise diwaane aashiq pe , duina meiN inaayat kaun kare

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Re: jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai ....

Wao... What an excellent contribution...

Keep it up !!!

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

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:)

Din main masmar hue raat main tameer hue
Khuwab hi khowab faqat rooh main tabeer hue
Umer bhar lekhte rahe phir warq sadaa raha
Jane kia lafz thee jo hum se na tehreer hue

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Re: jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai ....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
eik baar phir apnii eik nayee ghazal se saath aap logon ke saamne aaaya hoon..hamesha kii tarah aap ke comments ka intezaar rahega....

jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare
ab khud hii marna seekheNge, sanam se adaawat kaun kare

tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

tum rahte ho jis bastii meiN, wahaaN log ishq ke dushman haiN
maiN pyaar to tumse kar looNga, par eskii himaayat kaun kare

Pramod hamesha ki tarhan gr8! :)
kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare

koi shaayar hai diwaana hai , kahte haiN chaand pe marta hai
aise diwaane aashiq pe , duina meiN inaayat kaun kare
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jabardus:k:

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Re: jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai ....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

kisi aur ki lakeeroN meiN tum ho maiN karta bhi to kya karta
tumheiN paane ki zid choR ke ab jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar ki diwaareiN bhi ab mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein zindghi se shikayat kaun kare

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bohat khoob Pra g thanks 4 sharin....keep smiling....:)

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nice 1 :k:

thx. 4 sharin

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very Nice, Thanks for sharing:)

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ghazal pasand karne ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya arif, lamhey,jaan lewa,nikami bahna,Dragon~King and GuL-e-Tasbeeh.

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kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

bohat khoob!!!

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:k: bhoot achi hai

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very nice :k:

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honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Kashish,HeArT HaCKeR and chaand jii.