jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare

[Pramod]

jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare
ab khud hii jeena seekheNge, sanam se adaawat kaun kare

tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

tum rahte ho jis bastii meiN, wahaaN log ishq ke dushman haiN
maiN pyaar to tumse kar looNga, par eskii himaayat kaun kare

ye mera chiraage e dil jo tum, kab ka jalaa kar bhool gaye
toofaaN e jafaa meiN ab es, naadaaN kii hifaazat kaun kare

kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare

koi shaayar hai diwaana hai , kahte haiN chaand pe marta hai
aise diwaane aashiq pe , duina meiN inaayat kaun kare

By Pramod

[Koyal]

ye mera chiraage e dil jo tum, kab ka jalaa kar bhool gaye
toofaaN e jafaa meiN ab es, naadaaN kii hifaazat kaun kare

v nice thanks for sharing...:)

[show_sha]

its perfect!

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

*kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare* :k:..

Beautiful ghazal pramod bhaii i remem ap ne pehle bhee post ki thee, rite? thx for sharing again :~)

[Saqi_the_angel]

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
*kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare* :k:..

Beautiful ghazal pramod bhaii i remem ap ne pehle bhee post ki thee, rite? thx for sharing again :~)

HH Ji,

vo to duniyaa ko merii diivaangii Khush aa ga_ii
tere haatho.n me.n vagarnaa pahalaa patthar dekhataa

aa.Nkh me.n aa.Nsuu ja.De the par sadaa tujh ko na dii
is tavaqqo par ki shaayad tuu palaT kar dekhataa

merii qismat kii lakiire.n mere haatho.n me.n na thii.n
tere maathe par ko_ii meraa muqaddar dekhataa

zindagii phailii hu_ii thii shaam-e-hijraa.N kii tarah
kis ko itanaa hausalaa thaa kaun jii kar dekhataa

Duubane vaalaa thaa aur saahil pe cheharo.n kaa hujuum
pal kii mohalat thii mai.n kis ko aa.Nkh bhar ke dekhataa

Khair Andaish

Saqi

[Saqi_the_angel]

Re: jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
jab dil hi hamaara dushman hai to hum pe shafaqat kaun kare
ab khud hii jeena seekheNge, sanam se adaawat kaun kare

tum yaad bahot to aaogey , jab chaand falak pe niklegaa
hum dil ko magar samjha lenge, kismat se baghawat kaun kare

tum rahte ho jis bastii meiN, wahaaN log ishq ke dushman haiN
maiN pyaar to tumse kar looNga, par eskii himaayat kaun kare

ye mera chiraage e dil jo tum, kab ka jalaa kar bhool gaye
toofaaN e jafaa meiN ab es, naadaaN kii hifaazat kaun kare

kisi aur kii lakeeroN meiN tum ho, maiN karta bhii to kya karta
tumheiN paane kii zid chhoD ke ab, jeene kii hasrat kaun kare

es ghar kii diwaareiN bhii ab, mere dil ke manind TuT chukieN
koi umang nahin ab saaNsoN mein, zindagee se shikaayat kaun kare

koi shaayar hai diwaana hai , kahte haiN chaand pe marta hai
aise diwaane aashiq pe , duina meiN inaayat kaun kare

By Pramod
[/QUOTE]

Promod Ji,

Zabardast

[abc1234]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *
ye mera chiraage e dil jo tum, kab ka jalaa kar bhool gaye
toofaaN e jafaa meiN ab es, naadaaN kii hifaazat kaun kare

v nice thanks for sharing...:)
[/QUOTE]

i loved this shayr too

beautiful ghazal Paramod ji, bohot khoob

[Pramod]

Ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai ke liye aap logon ka bahot bahot shukriya ** Koyal,show_sha , Saqi and irem **.

** HeArT HaCKeR Sahiba : ** haaN ye meri puraani ghazal hai esi liye shaayad yahaaN pahle bhii post kii hogii maine. ye to aap kii zarra navaazii hai ke aap ne ese ab tak yaad rakha. bahot bahot shukriya aap ka.

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *

HH Ji,

vo to duniyaa ko merii diivaangii Khush aa ga_ii
tere haatho.n me.n vagarnaa pahalaa patthar dekhataa

aa.Nkh me.n aa.Nsuu ja.De the par sadaa tujh ko na dii
is tavaqqo par ki shaayad tuu palaT kar dekhataa

merii qismat kii lakiire.n mere haatho.n me.n na thii.n
tere maathe par ko_ii meraa muqaddar dekhataa

zindagii phailii hu_ii thii shaam-e-hijraa.N kii tarah
kis ko itanaa hausalaa thaa kaun jii kar dekhataa

Duubane vaalaa thaa aur saahil pe cheharo.n kaa hujuum
pal kii mohalat thii mai.n kis ko aa.Nkh bhar ke dekhataa

Khair Andaish

Saqi

wah boht khoob.. aap ki apnii ghazal hai ye :k:

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

*Originally posted by Pramod: *

** HeArT HaCKeR Sahiba : ** haaN ye meri puraani ghazal hai esi liye shaayad yahaaN pahle bhii post kii hogii maine. ye to aap kii zarra navaazii hai ke aap ne ese ab tak yaad rakha. bahot bahot shukriya aap ka.

c meri yadasht kitni achii hai :~P

waisay aap apnii pehle ki likhee hoee ghazals/poems phir se post keriye ga zaroor

[koiDost]

aadaab Pramod Bhai ,

dil khush kar diyaa aap ne. khoob lambee umar ho aap kii, taaki aap aisee hee gazleN sunaate raheN. aur hamaari bhi umar lambee ho ki ham baiTh kar sunte raheN!! :)

shukriya ye dilkash ghazal sunane ka !!!

[Pramod]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by koiDost: *
aadaab Pramod Bhai ,

dil khush kar diyaa aap ne. khoob lambee umar ho aap kii, taaki aap aisee hee gazleN sunaate raheN. aur hamaari bhi umar lambee ho ki ham baiTh kar sunte raheN!! :)

shukriya ye dilkash ghazal sunane ka !!!
[/QUOTE]

honsla afzaai karne aur duaaoN meiN yaad rakhne ke liye, aap ka bohot bahot shukriya ** Waseem Sahab **.

[Aceones]

very nice.
bohot achi ghazal hay :k:

[Pramod]

honsla afzaai ke liye shukriya ** Aceones! **

[chand_chehra]

waah bohat khoob :k:

[Nazi83]

very nice .. Keep up the good work !!

[DiYa]

:k:

[system]

Thanks for sharing!