Jab Bhi Bandhta HooN MaiN Irada Toot Jata Hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Sheal November 6, 2007, 11:19pm 1

Zara si dair maiN barsooN ka nata toot jata hai
Jab apnay jism say sansooN ka rishta toot jata hai

Hawa hi say gharoor-e-moj-e-dariya ser uthata hai
Hawa hi say gharoor- e -moj -e- dariya toot jata hai

Hawadis ki musalsal zarb kari maiN jo rehta hai
Bohot mazboot ho ker bhi wo loha toot jata hai

Is afsanay ko bhi rang-e-haqeeqat day diya kis nay
Kai’ee jhootay ikathae hooN to sachea toot jata hai

Kinaray baith ker darya ki mojooN say na youN khailo
Keh mojooN say hi dariya kaa kinaraa toot jata hai

Na’janay kon si aisi kami shoq - e - safer maiN hai
Keh jab bhi bandhta hooN maiN irada toot jata hai

Shab-e-Hijar November 6, 2007, 11:26pm 2

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bohat hi khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke November 7, 2007, 12:29am 3

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umda.

NikamiJano November 7, 2007, 1:12am 4

Re: Jab Bhi Bandhta HooN MaiN Irada Toot Jata Hai

nice sharing :)

redidentity November 7, 2007, 4:37am 5

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Beautiful..

tum_bin_1 November 7, 2007, 8:16am 6

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Very nice :)

Koyal November 7, 2007, 10:56pm 7

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Shalwar Kameez WITHOUT dupatta

Sheal November 7, 2007, 10:56pm 8

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what happened koyal jee .....?

bheegiyaad November 7, 2007, 11:00pm 9

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samaj nahi aaya hoga
elfy use karona nahi tootay ga

:k:

glamorous November 7, 2007, 11:04pm 10

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:)

Sheal November 7, 2007, 11:36pm 11

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thanks
ainda UHU laga ker joray rakhnay ki koshish karoon gi

Starlight November 8, 2007, 12:07am 12

Re: Jab Bhi Bandhta HooN MaiN Irada Toot Jata Hai

Achi Gazal ha!

Sheal November 8, 2007, 12:15am 13

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shukria starlight :)

K_Khan November 8, 2007, 12:30am 14

Re: Jab Bhi Bandhta HooN MaiN Irada Toot Jata Hai

nice sharing.. :k:

~~~ Missing someone ~~~

~~~ Missing someone ~~~

Sheal November 8, 2007, 12:45am 15

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shukria janab... yahan chai lain gay ap...........?

~~~ Missing someone ~~~

K_Khan November 8, 2007, 12:49am 16

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yahan per chai Adaab-e-mehfil ke khilaaf na ho jai... chalain baiThak mai he chal kai noosh karTAi hain. :)

Sheal November 8, 2007, 12:58am 17

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tp main tashreef laiyay phir :p

Aryaan November 9, 2007, 3:06am 18

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Bohat khoob Sheal..:k:

Sheal November 9, 2007, 7:48pm 19

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Thanks Aryaan :)

AQ November 9, 2007, 8:21pm 20

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Awesome selection Sheal :k: