jaate jaate voh mujhe achchi nishaani de gaya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhi nishaani de gayaa *

umr bhar dohraaoonga aisi kahanii de gayaa

*us se main kuchh paa sakoon aisi kahaan ummeed thi *

gham bhi vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaani de gayaa

*sab havaayen le gayaa mere samandar ki ko_i *

aur mujh ko ek karati baadbaani de gayaa

*khair main pyaasaa rahaa par us ne itanaa to kiyaa *

meri palakon ki kataaron ko vo paani de gayaa
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Javed Akhtar
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Re: jaate jaate voh mujhe achchi nishaani de gaya

too gooooooooooooood

lovely

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Re: jaate jaate voh mujhe achchi nishaani de gaya

ap acha likhte ho
kal bhi ap ki aik post dekhi thi
keep i up

:)

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Re: jaate jaate voh mujhe achchi nishaani de gaya

us se main kuchh paa sakoon aisi kahaan ummeed thi
**gham bhi vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaani de gayaa

Bohut-khoob!