Jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa
umr bhar doharaauu.Ngaa aisii kahanii de gayaa

us se mai.n kuchh paa sakuu.N aisii kahaa.N ummiid thii
Gam bhii vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaanii de gayaa

sab havaaye.N le gayaa mere sama.ndar kii ko_ii
aur mujh ko ek karatii baadabaanii de gayaa

Khair mai.n pyaasaa rahaa par us ne itanaa to kiyaa
merii palako.n kii kataaro.n ko vo paanii de gayaa.

(Javed Akhter)

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Re: Jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa

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*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *

KhaiR maiN pyasaa rahaa par us ne itanaa to kiyaa
merii palakoiN kii kataaroN ko vo paanii de gayaa.

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bohat khoob thanks 4 sahrin nazish..:)

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Nice1 :k:

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my fave :blush:
thanks 4 sharying :flower1:

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Re: Jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
Khain maiN pyasa rahaa par us nay itna to kiya
Meri palakoN kay QatroN ko woh pani day gaya
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Very nice :)
Thanks for sharing

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beautiful :k:

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Re: Jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
jaate jaate vo mujhe achchhii nishaanii de gayaa
umr bhar doharaauu.Ngaa aisii kahanii de gayaa

us se mai.n kuchh paa sakuu.N aisii kahaa.N ummiid thii
Gam bhii vo shaayad baraa-e-meharabaanii de gayaa

sab havaaye.N le gayaa mere sama.ndar kii ko_ii
aur mujh ko ek karatii baadabaanii de gayaa

Khair mai.n pyaasaa rahaa par us ne itanaa to kiyaa
merii palako.n kii kataaro.n ko vo paanii de gayaa.

(Javed Akhter)
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masha Allah..... this is really beautiful.....

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very nice

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Thanks everyone.

Ullu ji you are welcome :-)