hay aaj hi jo aaghaz ik safar jao
tumhe naseeb tumhara naya ye ghar jao
yehi dua ke jaate huae na dekhen tumhen
yehi dua hai ke kabhi rah se guzar jao
yeh chand khwab jo ab tak bacha ke rakhen hein
tumhare khwab hein tum khud hi tor kar jao
dua bhi aakhiri koshish thi rokne ki tumhe
meri dua mein nahi hai koi asar jao
wow ...
last sentence zara zoor ka lagha ...
Jo dua ab poori nahie hoon ghi...
wo agle jahaan me hoon ghi... dun worry..
but a nice poem indeed. :)
yeh chand khwab jo ab tak bacha ke rakhen hein
tumhare khwab hein tum khud hi tor kar jao
dua bhi aakhiri koshish thi rokne ki tumhe
meri dua mein nahi hai koi asar jao
Simply beautiful, CHhutki ji.
Bahot hi achha hai.
Thanks for sharing...............
simple and sheer poetry...
very touching
Re: JaaO
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*Originally posted by CHhutki: *
yeh chand khwab jo ab tak bacha ke rakhen hein
tumhare khwab hein tum khud hi tor kar jao
dua bhi aakhiri koshish thi rokne ki tumhe
meri dua mein nahi hai koi asar jao
[/QUOTE]
zor ka jhatka zor se hee laga chutki :(
wah :k:
jaao