Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

Jaan_Lewaa · February 10, 2005, 1:21am

Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon
Dil Ki Har Baat Zamanay Ko Sunana Chahoon

Usko Khushboo Ki Tarhan Saath Bhi Rakhna Apnay
Aur Phir Usko Zamanay Say Chupana Chahoon

Koi Bacha Mere Undar Bhi Chupa Baitha Hai
Ruth Jata Hai, Mai Jab Usko Manana Chahoon

Ek Machli Ki Tarhan Jaal Mai Aaya Hoon Main
Aur Phansta Hoon Jo Ab Khudko Churana Chahoon

Ek Uljhan Mai Mujhay Daal Dia Hai Usnay
Apna Bana Na Sakoo, Na Ussay Chorna Chahoon

Ab Tak Yaad Hai Mujhay Woh Purani Baatein
Bhool Kar Bhi Na Jinhain Mai Bhoolana Chahoon

chodhry · February 10, 2005, 5:55am

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

What a stunning peice man :k:

Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon
Dil Ki Har Baat Zamanay Ko Sunana Chahoon
Koi Bacha Mere Undar Bhi Chupa Baitha Hai
Ruth Jata Hai, Mai Jab Usko Manana Chahoon

Wah wah!

Golden_Scorpion_1 · February 10, 2005, 7:14am

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

Usko Khushboo Ki Tarhan Saath Bhi Rakhna Apnay
Aur Phir Usko Zamanay Say Chupana Chahoon

Wah.. Very nice…

Dont U think ke…

Ek Uljhan Mai Mujhay Daal Dia Hai Usnay
Apna Bana Na Sakoo, Na Ussay Chorna Chahoon

/\ needs some Editing… I mean… Wazan sort of stuff

Amal · February 10, 2005, 2:03pm

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

Beautiful stuff:k: But given your track record, how do we know it’s yours?

abc1234 · February 10, 2005, 2:09pm

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

:) nice

system · February 10, 2005, 2:13pm

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

Was thinking the same

But for the rest.. it’s truly great! Keep it up

fghd · October 5, 2005, 5:42am

Re: Jaanay Kyun Apni Hansi Aap Urana Chahoon

ur stunning piece, sure makes me cry!!