Jaam rakhain par hosh na aain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bohut socha
bohut dhoonda
un herzon ko
jo lekh pain sada meri
jo cho aain ada teri
arzo thi bohut
kahain kisi eik pal main mil jain
yeh dil, mohabat, khwab teray
qadmon main tere hum rakh aain
dukh, lambhi raatain, num aakhain
daman main apnay bhar laain
aseer tammna aaj bhi hain
chand lafz kuch aisay keh pain
jo makan say la’makan tak, ho aain
…
(Nata’maam)

Adab Arz
(Azad)

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intresting n deep :)

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O to aap samjh bhi layti hain … :confused:

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Wonderful and thanks for sharing..... simply great

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Wonderful and thanks for sharing..... simply great
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Nawazish Dilsay .. long time no c ... aik to aap ka number kabhi kaam nahi karta ... and i am so lazy in writing emails .. khair Eid kahan karo gay aap ... humara to Vegetarian ho kay bhi jee karta hay Dug Dugi kay tika kabab khanay ko .... Haai ray majboriyan.

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:k:

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Subha ki pehli kiran nay chuwa kafan ko meray
Shehir sara umad aya phir dafan ko meray

Adab Arz

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:k:

:flower1:

HUmmmmmmm :wink:

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:flower2: nice :flower2:

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Thank you all :)

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *

Nawazish Dilsay .. long time no c ... aik to aap ka number kabhi kaam nahi karta ... and i am so lazy in writing emails .. khair Eid kahan karo gay aap ... humara to Vegetarian ho kay bhi jee karta hay Dug Dugi kay tika kabab khanay ko .... Haai ray majboriyan.
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ya nahi soocha tha ka apna dais behi pardes kagay ga...

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

ya nahi soocha tha ka apna dais behi pardes kagay ga...
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iss liay to hum soch'tay nahi

p.s.
suna hay Eid Aik to din main honay wali hay ... I thought i will drop by .. par New year eve. ko 4x4 ulatt gaii ... Khair zindagi rahi to kisi na kisi morr par mil hi jain gay.

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great !!!!!!

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Re: Jaam rakhain par hosh na aain

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
Bohut socha
bohut dhoonda
un herzon ko
jo lekh pain sada meri
jo cho aain ada teri
arzo thi bohut
kahain kisi eik pal main mil jain
yeh dil, mohabat, khwab teray
qadmon main tere hum rakh aain
dukh, lambhi raatain, num aakhain
daman main apnay bhar laain
aseer tammna aaj bhi hain
chand lafz kuch aisay keh pain
jo makan say la'makan tak, ho aain
........
(Nata'maam)

Adab Arz
(Azad)
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tobah karain kitna piyan gay

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
great !!!!!!
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Nawazish Suraj

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Re: Re: Jaam rakhain par hosh na aain

Pelay Ja Pelay Ja … :mudhosh:

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awesome stuff... thnx fr sharing man.. :-)

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Re: Jaam rakhain par hosh na aain

:k:

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Nawazish Capri

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:)