~Jaal~

_Passionate · June 19, 2003, 1:21am

Jub merey paas they tum
mein ne kai baar yeh socha tum se
aankh mein bikhrey huey khwaab ka ehwaal kahun
kesey kat-tey hein merey roz-o-mah-o-saal kahun
fesley aur amal mein lekin
ik dewaar jo sadion se khari hai mein bhi
uss pe rozan hi bananey ki tag-o-do mein raha
say-e-bekaar tamanna ki qalamro mein raha

Ub jub tum bichrey ho tu
din raat merey dil mein ajab wehm sa rehta hai
ke jesey mein ne
yun hi ik khof ko dewaar bana rakha tha
dil ko ik nukta-e-purkaar bana rakha tha
sochta hun agar mein ne kabhi
tumko iss khwaab ka ehwaal sunaya hota tu bhala kia hota
hud se hud tum meri baaton se khafa ho jatey
ik tamaskhur ki hansi hans ke juda ho jaatey

~Amjad Islam amjad

Paglee · June 19, 2003, 1:43am

v nice Passion..:)

_Passionate · June 19, 2003, 1:43am

thanks paglee :~)

Azad · June 19, 2003, 6:11am

humm

Amarbail1 · June 19, 2003, 6:32am

Wah…:k:

Dilsay · June 19, 2003, 6:34am

This is really great.. thanks for sharing the wonderful piece.....

Azad · June 19, 2003, 10:00am

theek hay jee .. to phir nazar kharch kar hi laytay hain
khair advance main … Bohut hi khoob :k:

_Passionate · June 20, 2003, 2:11am

thanks amarbail and dilsay :-)

Azad.. :-)

Azad · June 20, 2003, 5:41am

acha kia her ayray ghairay ko khwab ka batana monasib bhi nahi hay

_Passionate · June 22, 2003, 11:56pm

Azad - ji i’ll keep that in mind :halo:

Galaxy · June 23, 2003, 4:58am

great:k:

_Passionate · June 24, 2003, 11:53pm

thanks galaxy

Shoki · June 25, 2003, 12:55am

Nice:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 25, 2003, 1:09am

bohut khoob:k::k:

Sooraj · June 25, 2003, 2:13am

thanks shoki and ghazal kisi ki

ghazal_kisi_ke · June 25, 2003, 2:19am

^^ Sooraj jee yeh apka thread to nahi hai phir …

Muslim_Queen · June 25, 2003, 2:44am

very nice. ty for sharing.

Dania · June 25, 2003, 5:10am

zabardast :k:

_Passionate · June 26, 2003, 12:12am

thanks shoki, gKK, MQ, n dania :)

Sooraj :p

~*Jaal*~

~Jaal~